科目组合
英语二: 英语知识运用 、阅读理解 、翻译 、写作
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评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案F对应41题。标准答案为C(Undertaking too many extracurricular activities will hardly be expected)。Sue Rexford的观点是大学不希望学生有过多课外活动清单,强调质量而非数量,与C选项完全匹配。学生选择F(Engaging in uncommon activities can demonstrate students' determination and dedication)是Josoph Adegboyega-Edun的观点,属于张冠李戴。逻辑错误,扣2分,得0分。
(2)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案E对应42题。标准答案为E(High school students participating in popular activity should be the best at it)。Sara Harberson明确建议在热门活动中要做到最好,与E选项完全一致。思路正确,不扣分,得2分。
(3)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案A对应43题。标准答案为A(Students who stand out in a specific extracurricular activity will have an advantage)。Katie Kelley强调在某一课外活动中脱颖而出对申请顶尖院校有积极作用,与A选项核心含义匹配。思路正确,不扣分,得2分。
(4)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案G对应44题。标准答案为G(It is advisable for students to choose an extracurricular activity that is related to their future study at college)。Mayghin Levine指出课外活动与申请专业相关是加分项,与G选项完全一致。思路正确,不扣分,得2分。
(5)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案B对应45题。标准答案为B(Students whose extracurricular activity has benefited their community are likely to win a scholarship)。Erica Gwyn提到课外活动对社区有积极影响可能赢得奖学金,与B选项完全匹配。思路正确,不扣分,得2分。
题目总分:0+2+2+2+2=8分
伴随着咖啡和新鲜出炉面包的飘荡在空气中的香味,摊位排满着各色的蔬菜和诱人的奶酪,在一旁还有人们友好交流的嘈杂声。农民集市真是一场感官盛宴。这里提供了一个机会,能够与负责提高农作物价格、支持当地经济以及采摘新鲜水果的人交流,这几乎发生在同一时间。
农民集市通常每日或每周开展一次,大多数是以户外摊位进行的。它允许农民或生产商去直接售卖产品为顾客。集市的规模和规章的变化是季节性,这取决于当地的农历。所以你很有可能在一年中的不同时间发现有不同的产品在出售。通过减少中间商,农民们能够从他们的产品中获取更多利润。这也有利于顾客精确地查看着他们的钱到了什么地方和什么人。
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分3分)
得2分。学生将"sensory feast"正确译为"感官盛宴",并基本还原了环境描写的画面感。但"排满着各色的蔬菜"中的"排满"不如标准答案"挤满"准确;"友好交流的嘈杂声"的表述存在矛盾(嘈杂声通常不用于形容友好交流),且漏译"buzz"的动态感。
(2)得分及理由(满分3分)
得1分。严重误译"growing or raising your food"为"提高农作物价格"(应为"种植或培育食物"),"pick up fresh seasonal produce"错误理解为"采摘新鲜水果"(应为"购买时令农产品")。逻辑关系混乱,将并列目的状语错误串联为"与...人交流"的单一动作。
(3)得分及理由(满分3分)
得2分。"weekly or monthly"误译为"每日或每周"(漏译"每月"),"producers"未译为标准答案的"生产者"而用"生产商"(可接受)。"规章的变化"属于误译(应为"规律性"),但季节性和农历部分表述正确。
(4)得分及理由(满分3分)
得2分。基本传达原文信息,但"规模和规章的变化"存在严重歧义(应为"规模或规律性"),"查看着"时态错误(应为"看到"),"到了什么地方和什么人"句式生硬(标准答案的"流向了谁"更符合中文表达)。
(5)得分及理由(满分2分)
得2分。"减少中间商"和"获取更多利润"的翻译准确完整,无扣分点。
(6)得分及理由(满分1分)
得0.5分。虽然基本含义正确,但"精确地查看着"存在时态和用词问题,"到了什么地方和什么人"的表述不够流畅,未达到标准答案"准确地看到...流向了谁"的简洁程度。
题目总分:2+1+2+2+2+0.5=9.5分
Dear Jack,
It gives me immense pleasure to do a survey on the protection of old houses in an ancient town with you.I’ll like to share my plan.
First of all,it is significant for we to learn the information about the old houses, which can help us to make more clear plan accord to these information. Additionally, we really need to communicate with local residents, we can acquire more its history from them. Finally, we should enter the old houses which can help us to know its structure and condition now. Do you agree my plan?
Looking forward to you,I hope you can offer some suggestion to me.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分4分)
得分:3分
理由:内容基本覆盖题目要求的两点(提出计划和征求对方意见),但计划部分较为笼统,缺乏具体细节(如调查方法、时间安排等),属于次要要点遗漏。开头和结尾符合邮件格式要求。
(2)语言表达(满分4分)
得分:2分
理由:存在多处语法和词汇错误(如"I’ll like"应为"I’d like","for we"应为"for us","accord to"应为"according to","acquire more its history"应为"acquire more about its history","agree my plan"应为"agree with my plan"),部分句子结构混乱(如第二段第二句包含两个独立分句未正确连接)。错误较多但尚未严重影响理解。
(3)格式与逻辑(满分2分)
得分:1分
理由:邮件格式基本正确(称呼、结尾、署名完整),但逻辑衔接较弱(计划部分列举点之间缺乏过渡词),且语域混合(如"immense pleasure"偏正式,但语法错误又显得不严谨)。结尾句"Looking forward to you"存在表达错误(应为"Looking forward to your reply")。
题目总分:3+2+1=6分
As we can see, the bar chart explicitly shows the reception of students from practical lesson in an university. According to the data, given above, learning knowledge accounts for the largest proportion, 91.3% ,followed by improving practical ability, which reaching for 84.8%.Strength coordination and feeling of pleasure are comparatively lower, being 32.6% and 54.4% respectively.
What the statistics reflect is closely related to the following factors: To begin with, it is readily observable that students usually practice in lab or make a study. These activities is related to their knowledge. That is the major reason why a increasing number of students acquire improving. Additionally, students' consciousness of practice has changed a lot. Most students have realized the funny of practice.
Taking all above into consideration, the phenomenon shown in the chart various reception in different students.I believe that students could improve themselves in practical lesson.
评分及理由
(1)内容要点(满分5分)
得分:3分
理由:学生描述了图表中的主要数据(91.3%学习知识、84.8%提升动手能力、54.4%心情舒畅、32.6%增强合作能力),但未明确解释“增强合作能力”(strength coordination应为enhanced cooperation),且评论部分未能有效分析数据差异的原因(如动手能力与知识学习比例接近的原因未说明)。内容要点基本覆盖,但深度不足。
(2)语言质量(满分5分)
得分:3分
理由:语法错误较多(如“which reaching”应为“which reaches”,“These activities is”应为“are”,“a increasing number”应为“an increasing number”,“the funny of practice”应为“the fun of practice”),词汇使用不够准确(如“reception”应为“perceptions”或“benefits”)。结构简单,衔接词使用有限(仅“To begin with”“Additionally”),但整体意思尚可理解。
(3)结构与连贯性(满分5分)
得分:3分
理由:文章分段基本合理(描述、原因、总结),但段落间过渡生硬。结尾句“the phenomenon shown in the chart various reception”存在语法错误,影响连贯性。未使用数据对比或逻辑连接词深化分析,结构较松散。
题目总分:3+3+3=9分