2013年考研英语(二)考试试题

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英语二: 英语知识运用 、阅读理解 、翻译 、写作

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第1题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

Section I Use of English

Directions:

Read the following text. Choose the best word(s) for each numbered blank and mark A, B, C or D on the ANSWER SHEET. (10 points)

Given the advantages of electronic money, you might think that we would move quickly to the cashless society in which all payments are made electronically. $\underline{\quad1\quad}$, a true cashless society is probably not around the corner. Indeed, predictions have been $\underline{\quad2\quad}$ for two decades but have not yet come to fruition. For example, *Business Week* predicted in 1975 that electronic means of payment would soon “revolutionize the very $\underline{\quad3\quad}$ of money itself,” only to $\underline{\quad4\quad}$ itself several years later. Why has the movement to a cashless society been so $\underline{\quad5\quad}$ in coming?

Although electronic means of payment may be more efficient than a payments system based on paper, several factors work $\underline{\quad6\quad}$ the disappearance of the paper system. First, it is very $\underline{\quad7\quad}$ to set up the computer, card reader, and telecommunications networks necessary to make electronic money the $\underline{\quad8\quad}$ form of payment. Second, paper checks have the advantage that they $\underline{\quad9\quad}$ receipts, something that many consumers are unwilling to $\underline{\quad10\quad}$. Third, the use of paper checks gives consumers several days of “float” – it takes several days $\underline{\quad11\quad}$ a check is cashed and funds are $\underline{\quad12\quad}$ from the issuer’s account, which means that the writer of the check can earn interest on the funds in the meantime. $\underline{\quad13\quad}$ electronic payments are immediate, they eliminate the float for the consumer.

Fourth, electronic means of payment may $\underline{\quad14\quad}$ security and privacy concerns. We often hear media reports that an unauthorized hacker has been able to access a computer database and to alter information $\underline{\quad15\quad}$ there. The fact that this is not an $\underline{\quad16\quad}$ occurrence means that dishonest persons might be able to access bank accounts in electronic payments systems and $\underline{\quad17\quad}$ from someone else’s accounts. The $\underline{\quad18\quad}$ of this type of fraud is no easy task, and a new field of computer science is developing to $\underline{\quad19\quad}$ security issues. A further concern is that the use of electronic means of payment leaves an electronic $\underline{\quad20\quad}$ that contains a large amount of personal data. There are concerns that government, employers, and marketers might be able to access these data, thereby violating our privacy.

1. [A] Moreover  [B] However  [C] Therefore  [D] Otherwise

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第2题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

2. [A] off  [B] back  [C] over  [D] around

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第3题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

3. [A] power [B] concept [C] history [D] role

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第4题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

4. [A] reward [B] resist [C] resume [D] reverse

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第5题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

5. [A] silent [B] sudden [C] slow [D] steady

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第6题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

6. [A] for [B] against [C]with [D] on

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第7题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

7. [A] imaginative [B] expensive [C] sensitive [D] productive

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第8题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

8. [A] similar [B] original [C] temporary [D] dominant

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第9题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

9. [A] collect [B] provide [C] copy [D] print

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第10题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

10. [A] give up [B] take over [C] bring back [D] pass down

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第11题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

11. [A] before [B] after [C] since [D] when

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第12题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

12. [A] kept [B] borrowed [C] released [D]withdrawn

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第13题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

13. [A] Unless [B] Until [C] Because [D] Though

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第14题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

14. [A] hide [B] express [C] raise [D]ease

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第15题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

15. [A] analyzed [B] shared [C] stored [D] displayed

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第16题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

16. [A] unsafe [B] unnatural [C] uncommon [D] unclear

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第17题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

17. [A] steal [B] choose [C] benefit [D] return

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第18题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

18. [A] consideration [B] prevention [C] manipulation [D] justification

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第19题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

19. [A] cope with [B] fight against [C] adapt to [D] call for

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第20题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

20. [A] chunk [B] chip [C] path [D] trail

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第21题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Section Ⅱ Reading Comprehension

Part A

Directions:

Read the following four texts. Answer the questions below each text by choosing A, B,C or D. Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET 1. (40 points)

Text 1

In an essay entitled "Making It in America," the author Adam Davidson relates a joke from cotton country about just how much a modern textile mill has been automated: The average mill has only two employees today, "a man and a dog. The man is there to feed the dog, and the dog is there to keep the man away from the machines."

Davidson’s article is one of a number of pieces that have recently appeared making the point that the reason we have such stubbornly high unemployment and declining middle-class incomes today is largely because of the big drop in demand because of the Great Recession, but it is also because of the advances in both globalization and the information technology revolution, which are more rapidly than ever replacing labor with machines or foreign workers.

In the past, workers with average skills, doing an average job, could earn an average lifestyle. But, today, average is officially over. Being average just won’t earn you what it used to. It can’t when so many more employers have so much more access to so much more above average cheap foreign labor, cheap robotics, cheap software, cheap automation and cheap genius. Therefore, everyone needs to find their extra – their unique value contribution that makes them stand out in whatever is their field of employment.

Yes, new technology has been eating jobs forever, and always will. But there’s been an acceleration. As Davidson notes, "In the 10 years ending in 2009, [U.S.] factories shed workers so fast that they erased almost all the gains of the previous 70 years; roughly one out of every three manufacturing jobs – about 6 million in total – disappeared."

There will always be change – new jobs, new products, new services. But the one thing we know for sure is that with each advance in globalization and the I. T. revolution, the best jobs will require workers to have more and better education to make themselves above average.

In a world where average is officially over, there are many things we need to do to support employment, but nothing would be more important than passing some kind of G. I. Bill for the 21st century that ensures that every American has access to post-high school education.

21. The joke in Paragraph 1 is used to illustrate

[A] the impact of technological advances

[B] the alleviation of job pressure

[C] the shrinkage of textile mills

[D] the decline of middle class incomes

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第22题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

22. According to Paragraph 3, to be a successful employee,one has to.

[A] work on cheap software

[B] ask for a moderate salary

[C] adopt an average lifestyle

[D] contribute something unique

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第23题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

23. The quotation in Paragraph 4 explains that

[A] gains of technology have been erased

[B]job opportunities are disappearing at a high speed

[C] factories are making much less money than before

[D] new jobs and services have been offered

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第24题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

24. According to the author, to reduce unemployment, the most important is

[A] to accelerate the I.T. revolution

[B] to ensure more education for people

[C] to advance economic globalization

[D] to pass more bills in the 21st century

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第25题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

25. Which of the following would be the most appropriate title for the text?

[A] New Law Takes Effect

[B] Technology Goes Cheap

[C] Average Is Over

[D] Recession Is Bad

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第26题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text 2

A century ago, the immigrants from across the Atlantic included settlers and sojourners. Along with the many folks looking to make a permanent home in the United States came those who had no intention to stay, and 7milin people arrived while about 2 million departed. About a quarter of all Italia immigrants, for example, eventually returned to ltaly for good. They even had an affectionate nickname,"uccelli i passaggio," birds of passage.

Today, we are much more rigid about immigrants. We divide newcomers into two categories: legal or lll go o od we aith as - meican nnte aking o or rokun imiraion system and the long political paralysis over how to fix it, We don't need more categories,but we need to change the way we think about categories. We need to look beyond stict definitions of legal and illegal. To start, we can recognize the new birds of passage, those living and thriving in the gray areas. We might then begin to solve our immigration challenges.

Crop pickers,violinists, construction workers,entrepreneurs, engineers, ome health-care aides and physicists are among today's birds of passage. They are energetic participants in a

global economy driven by the fiow of work,money and ideas.They prefer to come and go as opportunity calls them, They can manage to have a job in one place and a family in another.

With or without permission, they straddle laws, jurisdictions and identities with ease.We need them to imagine the United States as a place where they can be productive for a while without committing themselves to staying forever.We need them to feel that home can be both here and there and that they can belong to two nations honorably.

Accommodating this new world of people in motion will require new attitudes on both sides of the immigration batle Lokin byond the cultur war logic of right or wrong means opening up the midle ground and understanding that managing immigration today requires multiple paths and multiple outcomes. Including some that are not easy to accomplish legally in the existing system.

26"Birds of passage" refers to those who

[A] immigrate across the Atlantic

[B] leave their home countries for good

[C] stay in a foreign temporarily

[D]find permanent jobs overseas

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第27题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

27 It is implied in paragraph 2 that the current immigration system in the US

[A] needs new immigrant categories

[B] has loosened control over immigrants

[C] should be adopted to meet challenges

[D] has been fixed via political means

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第28题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

28 According to the author, today's birds of passage want

[A] financial incentives.

[B] a global recognition.

[C]opportunities to get regular jobs.

[D]the freedom to stay and leave.

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第29题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

29 The author suggests that the birds of passage today should be treated_

[A] as faithful partners.

[B] with economic favors.

[C] with regal tolerance

[D]as mighty rivals.

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第30题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

30 which is the best itle of the passage?

[A] come and go: big mistake

[B] living and thriving : great risk

[C] with or without great risk

[D]legal or illegal: big mistake

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第31题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text3

Scientists have found that although we are prone to snap overreactions, if we take a moment and think about how we are likely to reat, we can reduce or even eliminate the negative effects of our quick,hard-wired responses.

Snap decisions can be important defense mechanisms; if we are judging whether someone is dangerous, our brains and bodies are hard-wired to react very quickly,within milliseconds. But we need more time to assess other factors. To accurately tell whether someone is sociable,studies show, we need at least a minute,preferably five.It takes a while to judge complex aspects of personality, like neuroticism or open-mindedness

But snap decisions in reaction to rapid stimuli aren't exclusive to the interpersonal realm. Psychologists at the University of Toronto found that viewing a fast-food logo for just a few milliseconds primes us to read 20 percent faster, even though reading has little to do with eating. We unconsciously associate fast food with speed and impatience and carry those impulses into whatever else we're doing, Subjects exposed to fast-food fiashes also tend to think a musical piece lasts too long.

Yet we can reverse such influences. If we know we will overreact to consumer products or housing options when we see a happy face (one reason good sales representatives and real estate agents are always smiling), we can take a moment before buying. lf we know female job screeners are more likely to reject attractive female applicants,we can help screeners understand their biases-or hire outside screeners.

John Gottman,the marriage exper, xplains that we quickly "thin slic" information reliably only after we ground such snap reactions in "thick sliced" long-term study. When Dr.Gottman really wants to assess whether a couple will stay together, he invites them to his island retreat for a muck longer evaluation; two days, not two seconds.

Our abit o mute our hard-wired reactions by pausing is what differentiates us from animals: doge can think about the future only intermittently or for a few minutes. But historically we have spent about 12 percent of our days contemplating the longer term. Although technology might change the way we react, it hasn't changed our nature.We still have the imaginative capacity to rise above temptation and reverse the high-speed trend.

31.The time needed in making decisions may___.

[A] vary according to the urgency of the situation

[B] prove the complexity of our brain reaction

[C] depend on the importance of the assessmen

[D] predetermine the accuracy of our judgment

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第32题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

32. Our reaction to a fast-food logo shows that snap decisions

[A] can be associative

[B] are not unconscious

[C] can be dangerous

[D] are not impulsive

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第33题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

33. To reverse the negative influences of snap decisions, we should_

[A] trust our first impression

[B] do as people usually do

[C] think before we act

[D] ask for expert advice

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第34题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

34. John Gottman says that reliable snap reaction are based on

[A] critical assessment

[B]thin sliced'study

[C] sensible explanation

[D] adequate information

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第35题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

35. The author's atitude toward reversing the high-speed trend is,

[A] tolerant

[B] uncertain

[C] optimistic

[D] doubtful

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第36题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text 4

Europe is not a gender-equality heaven. In particular, he corporate workplace will never be completely family-friendly unti women are part of senior management decisions, and Europe's top corporate-governance positions remain overwhelmingly male. Indeed,women hold only 14 percent of positions on Europe corporate boards

The Europe Union is now considering legislation to compel corporate boards to maintain a certain proportion of women-up to 60 percent. This proposed mandate was born of frustration. Last year,Europe Commission Vice President Viviane Reding issued a call to woluntary action. Reding

invited corporations to sign up for gender balance goal of 40 percent female board membership. But her appeal was considered a failure: only 24 companies took it up.

Do we need quotas to ensure that women can continue to climb the corporate Ladder fairy as they balance work and family?

"Personally, I don't like quotas," Reding said recently."But i like what the quotas do."Quotas get action: they "open the way to equality and they break through the glass celiny' according to Reding, a result seen in France and other countris with legally bindin provisions on placing women in top business positions.

I understand Reding's reluctance-and her frustration. I don't like quotas either; they run counter to my belief in meritocracy, government by the capable.Bur, when one considers the obstacles to achieving the meritocratic ideal, it does look as if a fairer world must be temporarily ordered.

After all, four decades of evidence has now shown that corporations in Europe as the US are evading the meritocratic hiring and promotion of women to top position-no matter how much "soft pressure" is put upon them. When women do break through to the summit of corporate poweras, for example, Sheryl Sandberg recently did at Facebook-they attract massive attention precisely because they remain the exception to the rule.

If appropriate pubic policies were in place to help all women--whether CEOs or their children's caregiversand all families, Sandberg would be no more newsworthy than any other highly capable person living in a more just society.

36.In the European corporate workplace,generally___

[A] women take the lead

[B] men have the final say

[C] corporate governance is overwhelmed

[D] senior management is family-friendly

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第37题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

37.The European Union's intended legislatin is

[A] a reflection of gender balance

[B] a reluctant choice

[C]a response to Reding's call

[D] a voluntary action

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第38题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

38. According to Reding,quotas may help women

[A] get top business positions

[B] see through the glass ceiling

[C] balance work and family

[D] anticipate legal results

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第39题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

39. The author's attitude toward Reding's appeal is one of

[A] skepticism

[B] objectiveness

[C] indiference

[D] approval

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第40题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

40. Women entering top management become headlines due to the lack of

[A] more social justice

[B] massive media attention

[C] sutable public policies

[D] greater'soft pressure"

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第41题 阅读理解 综合题 题目链接

Section Ⅱ Reading Comprehension

Part B

Directions:

You are going to read a list of headings and a text. Choose the most suitable heading from the list A-F for each numbered paragraph (41-45). Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET1. (10 points)

The hugely popular blog the Skint Foodie chronicles how Tony balances his love of good food with living on benefits. After bills, Tony has £60 a week to spend, 40 of which goes on food, but 10 years ago he was earning £130,000 a year working in corporate communications and eating at London's best restaurants "at least twice a week." Then his marriage failed, his career burned out and his drinking became serious. "The community mental health team saved my life. And I felt like that again, to a certain degree, when people responded to the blog so well. It gave me the validation and confidence that I'd lost. But it's still a day-by-day thing." Now he's living in a council flat and fielding offers from literary agents. He's feeling positive, but he'll carry on blogging not about eating as cheaply as you can - "there are so many people in a much worse state, with barely any money to spend on food" - but eating well on a budget. Here's his advice for economical foodies.

[A] Live like a peasant

[B] Balance your diet

[C] Shopkeepers are your friends

[D] Remember to treat yourself

[E] Stick to what you need

[F] Planning is everything

[G] Waste not, want not

41.________________

Impulsive spending isn't an option, so plan your week's menu in advance, making shopping lists for your ingredients in their exact quantities. I have an Excel template for a week of breakfast, lunch and dinner. Stop laughing: it's not just cost effective but helps you balance your diet. It's also a good idea to shop daily instead of weekly, because, being human, you'll sometimes change your mind about what you fancy.

42.________________

This is where supermarkets and their anonymity come in handy. With them, there's not the same embarrassment as when buying one carrot in a little greengrocer. And if you plan properly, you'll know that you only need, say, 350g of shin of beef and six rashers of bacon, not whatever weight is pre-packed in the supermarket chiller.

43.________________

You may proudly claim to only have frozen peas in the freezer - that's not good enough. Mine is filled with leftovers, bread, stock, meat and fish. Planning ahead should eliminate wastage, but if you have surplus vegetables you'll make vegetable soup, and all fruits threatening to go off will be cooked or juiced.

44.________________

Everyone says this, but it really is a top tip for frugal eaters. Shop at butchers, delis and fish-sellers regularly, even for small things, and be super friendly. Soon you'll feel comfortable asking if they've any knuckles of ham for soups and stews, or beef bones, chicken carcasses and fish heads for stock which, more often than not, they will let you have for free.

45.________________

You won't be eating out a lot, but save your pennies and once every few months treat yourself to a set lunch at a good restaurant - £1.75 a week for three months gives you £21 - more than enough for a three-course lunch at Michelin-starred Arbutus. It's £16.95 there - or £12.99 for a large pizza from Domino's: I know which I'd rather eat.

(请将41-45题的答案填入下方的输入框,不区分大小写)

你的答案:

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评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:F。与标准答案一致。第41段强调提前规划每周菜单、制作购物清单,对应"Planning is everything"。得2分。

(2)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:E。与标准答案一致。第42段提到在超市购买精确需要的分量,避免购买预包装的多余食物,对应"Stick to what you need"。得2分。

(3)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:G。与标准答案一致。第43段强调利用剩余食材制作汤或果汁,避免浪费,对应"Waste not, want not"。得2分。

(4)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:C。与标准答案一致。第44段建议与店主建立友好关系以获得免费食材,对应"Shopkeepers are your friends"。得2分。

(5)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:D。与标准答案一致。第45段建议定期在餐厅犒劳自己,对应"Remember to treat yourself"。得2分。

题目总分:2+2+2+2+2=10分

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第42题 翻译 综合题 题目链接

Section III Translation

46. Directions:

Translate the following text into Chinese. Write your translation on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

I can pick a date from the past 53 years and know instantly where I was, what happened in the news and even the day of the week. I’ve been able to do this since I was four.

I never feel overwhelmed with the amount of information my brain absorbs. My mind seems to be able to cope and the information is stored away neatly. When I think of a sad memory, I do what everybody does – try to put it to one side. I don’t think it’s harder for me just because my memory is clearer. Powerful memory doesn’t make my emotions any more acute or vivid. I can recall the day my grandfather died and the sadness I felt when we went to the hospital the day before. I also remember that the musical play Hair opened on Broadway on the same day – they both just pop into my mind in the same way.

你的答案:

我能从过去53年的日子里挑一个并且能立刻当时知道我在哪,发生了什么新闻,甚至是一周的周几。 我从4岁起就能够做到这个了。

我从不觉得我的大脑会因吸取了大量的信息而感到难以承受。我的脑海似乎能够处理并且整齐有序地存储这些信息。当我想到了一些不好的回忆,我与其他人做的一样,也就是把它搁置在一个角落里。我不觉得这对我来说是困难的,因为我的记忆很清晰。高效的记忆没有让我的情绪更加敏感或鲜明生动。我能够回忆起那天祖父离世,当我们在前一天赶去医院时的悲伤。我也能记住在同一天,百老汇表演的音乐剧Hair,两者以同样的方式骤然进入我的脑海中。


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分15分)

第一段翻译整体准确,但存在两处可改进的细节:
- "挑一个"可优化为"挑一天"更符合中文习惯;
- "发生了什么新闻"建议调整为"新闻报道了什么"更贴近原文"what happened in the news"的被动语态。
第二段存在三处明显偏差:
- "不好的回忆"未能准确传达"sad memory"的悲伤情感色彩;
- "因为我的记忆很清晰"与前文形成因果逻辑错误(原文是否定结构);
- "高效的记忆"与"强大的记忆力"存在语义差异;
- 专有名词《Hair》未按规范翻译为《发胶》。
基于上述分析,扣除4分,本项得分11分。

题目总分:11分

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第43题 写作 综合题 题目链接

Section IV Writing

Part A

47. Directions:

Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to

1) inform them about the details, and
2) encourage them to participate.

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write your address. (10 points)

你的答案:

Dear Fellow Classmates,

Our class is to hold a charity sale to raise money for those childre who are in need of help on January 5, 2016. As the monitor of our class, I'm calling on all students to take part in the sale.

We ask you to donate as much as you can to a fund we have set up to cover these children's tuition fees and other expenses. Unless we can raise sufficient money, those poor kids won't be able to afford to finish their educationj.

As a nation renowned worldwide for its many virtues, China and its people have been giving a helping hand to those who are in distress throught history. It's our duty to provide as much support as we can to those in need. Please contribute generously.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming


评分及理由

(1)内容完整性(满分3分)

得分:2分

理由:内容基本覆盖了主要要点,包括通知慈善义卖活动和鼓励参与。但存在以下问题:1)活动具体细节不够完整(如具体时间、地点等仅提到日期);2)将"charity sale"误解为直接捐款活动,与题目要求的"义卖"形式不符,这是关键内容偏差。

(2)语言表达(满分4分)

得分:3分

理由:语言基本流畅,但有明显错误:1)"childre"拼写错误;2)"educationj"拼写错误;3)"throught"应为"throughout";4)部分表达不够自然,如"China and its people have been giving..."与班级义卖的直接关联性不强。

(3)格式与逻辑(满分3分)

得分:2分

理由:格式基本正确,包含邮件基本要素。但逻辑存在明显问题:将"charity sale"理解为直接捐款,这与题目要求不符,属于逻辑错误。语域基本恰当,但部分内容与班级邮件情境不够贴合。

题目总分:2+3+2=7分

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第44题 写作 综合题 题目链接

Part B

48. Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

(图表标题为 “某高校学生兼职情况”,纵轴为 “人数百分比”,横轴为大学年级(大一、大二、大三、大四)。各年级学生兼职的人数百分比分别为:大一 67.77%、大二 71.13%、大三 71.93%、大四 88.24%。)

你的答案:

The column chart clearly reveals the statistics of students taking part-time jobs in a certain university. According to the survey, there has been a steady increase from 67.77% to 71.93% of students from freshmen to juniors holding temporary jobs, while the percentage of seniors working part-time has jumped markedly to 88.24%.

While part-time work does have the potential to negatively affect college students'studies, it can also be good for their future careers. It's obvious that doing a part-time job can adversely affect students'studies because it drains their energy. Part-time employment can also be detrimental to students by damaging their incentive to study. Despite the above disadvantages, working part-time on campus also offers several potential benefits. For one thing, it can help students better understand their preferences or to test out a possible career direction. Additionally, companies seeking to recruit fresh graduates will give preference to those with part-time experience.

In the end, the impact of part-time work on students'academic performance depends on their ability to maintain a balance between their studies and the part-time job.


评分及理由

(1)内容要点(满分5分)

得分:4分

理由:学生较好地完成了图表解读任务,准确描述了各年级兼职比例的变化趋势(从大一到大三稳步上升,大四显著增长)。评论部分讨论了兼职的利弊(影响学业vs促进职业发展),并给出了平衡的观点。但评论部分未能深入分析图表数据背后的原因(如大四兼职比例激增可能与求职需求相关),内容深度稍显不足。

(2)语言质量(满分5分)

得分:4分

理由:使用了较丰富的语法结构(如让步状语从句"While...", "Despite...")和词汇(detrimental, incentive, preference等)。存在少量语言错误:
- "students'studies" 应改为 "students' studies"(所有格后需空格)
- "it's obvious" 口语化表达,学术写作中建议用 "It is evident"
整体语言流畅度良好,错误不影响理解。

(3)篇章结构(满分5分)

得分:4分

理由:文章结构清晰,遵循"描述图表-利弊分析-总结观点"的逻辑脉络。使用了适当的衔接手段(While, Despite, For one thing, Additionally, In the end)。但段落间过渡略显生硬,结尾段未能与图表数据形成更强呼应。

题目总分:4+4+4=12分

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