科目组合
英语二: 英语知识运用 、阅读理解 、翻译 、写作
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评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:A,标准答案:A,匹配正确,得2分。
(2)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:F,标准答案:F,匹配正确,得2分。
(3)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:G,标准答案:G,匹配正确,得2分。
(4)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:C,标准答案:C,匹配正确,得2分。
(5)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:E,标准答案:E,匹配正确,得2分。
题目总分:2+2+2+2+2=10分
当在发展中国家的人们开始担心移民问题,他们通常担心的是他们预料的最好的最发达的去处是去硅谷,或者去医院和大学在一个发达的世界,他们是来自如英国,加拿大,澳大利亚的各种工人,他们尝试通过关于高等大学毕业生的移民法留下
很多学生已经发现了那些来自发达国家的接受过高质量教育的相当一部分人会想要去移民,一个关于2004年印度房屋持有的大型调查发现将近40%的移民者有着高等教育及以上的学历,相比于3.2%的所有25岁以上的印度人。这种人才流失长期困扰着贫困国家的政策制定者们,他们面对着扶苏他们的经济,依赖于那些有许多所需技能的工人来在大学教书,在他们的医院工作,以及带动工业创造出新的产品
评分及理由
(1)第一段翻译得分及理由(满分7.5分)
得分:3分
理由:
1. "当在发展中国家的人们开始担心移民问题" - 基本达意,但"开始担心"与原文"worry about"的时态不完全匹配(扣0.5分)
2. "他们通常担心的是他们预料的最好的最发达的去处是去硅谷" - 逻辑混乱,将"best and brightest"误解为"最好的最发达的去处",严重偏离原意(扣2分)
3. "或者去医院和大学在一个发达的世界" - 语序不通顺,表达生硬(扣1分)
4. "他们是来自如英国,加拿大,澳大利亚的各种工人" - 完全误解原文逻辑关系,将移民接收国误作工人来源国(扣2分)
5. "他们尝试通过关于高等大学毕业生的移民法留下" - 语义不清,"留下"一词使用错误(扣1.5分)
(2)第二段翻译得分及理由(满分7.5分)
得分:4分
理由:
1. "很多学生已经发现了那些来自发达国家的接受过高质量教育的相当一部分人会想要去移民" - "学生"应为"研究","发达国家"应为"发展中国家",存在严重逻辑错误(扣2分)
2. "一个关于2004年印度房屋持有的大型调查" - "房屋持有"应为"家庭",关键信息误译(扣1分)
3. "将近40%的移民者有着高等教育及以上的学历" - 基本正确(不扣分)
4. "相比于3.2%的所有25岁以上的印度人" - 数字略有误差但不影响理解(扣0.5分)
5. "他们面对着扶苏他们的经济" - "扶苏"应为"损害",用词错误(扣1分)
6. "依赖于那些有许多所需技能的工人" - "依赖于"应为"失去",逻辑关系完全相反(扣1.5分)
7. "以及带动工业创造出新的产品" - 基本达意但表达不够准确(扣0.5分)
题目总分:3+4=7分
To customer service center,
I am writing this letter to convey complaint about your product, and to offer you some valuable suggestions about how to improve the electronic dictionary.
When it comes to potential questions regarding the details, there are several items I would like to bring up.
Firstly, a recent study published in The Journal of Statistics indicates that more capable battery of electronic product make consumers feel better has gained recognition from market consumers.I think you should prompt the battery of electronic dictionary.What’s more, in my opinion your electronic dictionary should have more function because your electronic dictionary even can not read the word.But i still wish you can make it better in the future.
I would be grateful if you could take the above-mentioned points into consideration, and please feel free to contact me for any further information.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
该学生作答存在以下问题:
根据评分标准,该作答属于第二档(较差),得分为4分。
题目总分:4分
Reflected in the table above is the proportions of the works' feel about company
in different age.To be specific, the percentage of satiety, unknown and disatisfication have a evident change with people in different age.respectively. When taking a closer look, we can apparently find that the percentage of people feel unknown outnumbers the others and takes up the biggest proportion.To be specific, compared works in different age,the percentage of people feel satiety that firstly decreased from 16.7% to 0% and increased from 0% to 40% in next step.
Actually, this seemingly simple chart indicates a prevailing phenomenon that
people feel more and more stress in age from 41 to 50 is increasingly playing
an increasing role in recent years, whose fundamental factors, from my perspective, could be identified as follows.Firstly, the generalized theory of Maslow’s hierarchy of needs may explain this, which suggests that the more basic level of needs, such as promotion stress, must be met before the individual will strongly desire the higher level of needs.Besides, a recent study published in the Journal of Statistics indicates that people feel big stress in their age from 41 to 50 is the crucial factor in determining an society’s phenomenon. Based on data from a lab-based approach and following participants over several days, the linear mixed model suggested a positive correlation between them.
Considering all aspects of this issue, we could safely draw a conclusion that
this trend will surely continue/reverse in the coming years, as the basic
elements of origin remain.The government has the responsibility to encourage every citizen to try to make life easy.Only in this way can we build the community of a shared future.
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分5分):得分3分
学生基本完成了图表描述和评论的任务,但存在以下问题:图表描述部分数据引用不完整(仅提及满意度的变化,未全面覆盖三个年龄组和三种满意度状态),评论部分引入了与图表关联度不高的理论(马斯洛需求层次论)和研究引用,部分内容偏离主题。根据评分标准第三档"虽然漏掉了一些内容,但包含多数内容要点",给予中等分数。
(2)语言质量(满分5分):得分2分
语言表达存在较多问题:词汇使用不当(如"satiety"应改为"satisfaction","disatisfication"拼写错误),语法错误较多(如"works' feel"应为"employees' feelings","people feel unknown"表达不准确),句式结构混乱。部分句子表意不清,影响理解。符合第四档标准"有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解"。
(3)结构与衔接(满分5分):得分2分
文章结构基本完整,包含描述和评论部分,但逻辑衔接较差:图表描述与评论部分的过渡生硬,评论部分的理论解释与图表数据的关联性不强,结论部分较为空泛。段落内部和段落之间的衔接不够自然。符合第四档标准"未能用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性"。
题目总分:3+2+2=7分