2015年考研英语(二)考试试题

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英语二: 英语知识运用 、阅读理解 、翻译 、写作

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第1题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

Section I Use of English

Directions:

Read the following text. Choose the best word(s) for each numbered blank and mark A, B,C or D on ANSWER SHEET.(10 points)

In our contemporary culture,the prospect of communicating with-- or even looking at--a stranger is virtually unbearable. Everyone around us seems to agree by the way they fiddle with their phones,even without a $\underline{\quad1\quad}$ underground.

It's a sad reality -- our desire to avoid interacting with other human beings -- because there's $\underline{\quad2\quad}$ to be gained from talking to the stranger standing by you. But you wouldn't know it,$\underline{\quad3\quad}$into your phone.This universal armor sends the $\underline{\quad4\quad}$:"Please don't approach me."

What is it that makes us feel we need to hide $\underline{\quad5\quad}$ our screens?

One answer is fear,according to Jon Wortmann, executive mental coach. We fear rejection, or that our innocent social advances will be $\underline{\quad6\quad}$ as "creepy,".We fear we'11 be $\underline{\quad7\quad}$.We fear we'11 be disruptive. Strangers are inherently $\underline{\quad8\quad}$ to us, so we are more likely to feel $\underline{\quad9\quad}$ when communicating with them compared with our friends and acquaintances.To avoid this anxiety, we $\underline{\quad10\quad}$ to our phones. "Phones become our security blanket,"Wortmann says."They are our happy glasses that protect us from what we perceive is going to be more $\underline{\quad11\quad}$."

But once we rip off the bandaid, tuck our smartphones in our pockets and look up, it doesn't $\underline{\quad12\quad}$ so bad.In one 2011 experiment,behavioral scientists Nicholas Epley and Juliana Schroeder asked commuters to do the unthinkable: Start a $\underline{\quad13\quad}$.They had Chicago train commuters talk to their fellow $\underline{\quad14\quad}$."When Dr.Epley and Ms. Schroeder asked other people in the same train station to $\underline{\quad15\quad}$how they would feel after talking to a stranger,the commuters thought their $\underline{\quad16\quad}$ would be more pleasant if they sat on their own," the New York Times summarizes. Though the participants didn't expect a positive experience,after they $\underline{\quad17\quad}$ with the experiment,"not a single person reported having been snubbed.

18,these commtes were reportedly mre enjoyable compared with those sans communication, which makes absolute sense, 19 human beings thrive off of social connections.It's that 20: Talking to strangers can make you feel connected.

1. [A]ticket [B]permit [C]signal [D] record

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第2题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

2. [A] nothing [B]link [C] another [D] much

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第3题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

3. [A] beaten [B] guided [C] plugged [D] brought

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第4题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

4. [A] message [B] cede [C] notice [D] sign

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第5题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

5. [A] under [B] beyond [C] behind [D] from

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第6题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

6.[A] misinterpret [B] misapplied [C] misad justed [D] mismatched

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第7题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

7.[A] fired [B] judged [C]replaced [D] delayed

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第8题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

8.[A] unreasonable [B] ungrateful [C] unconventional [D] unfamiliar

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第9题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

9.[A] comfortable [B] anxious [C] conf ident [D] angry

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第10题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

10.[A] attend [B] point [C] take [D] turn

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第11题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

11.[A] dangerous [B] mysterious [C] violent [D] boring

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第12题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

12.[A] hurt [B] resist [C] bend [D] decay

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第13题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

13.[A] lecture [B] conversation [C] debate [D] negotiation

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第14题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

14.[A] trainees [B] employees [C] researchers [D]passengers

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第15题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

15.[A] reveal [B] choose [C] predict [D]design

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第16题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

16.[A] voyage [B] flight [C]walk [D] ride

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第17题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

17.[A] went through [B] did away [C] caught up [D] put up

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第18题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

18.[A]In turn [B]In particular [C]In fact [D]In consequence

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第19题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

19.[A] unless [B] since [C]if [D] whereas

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第20题 英语知识运用 单选题 题目链接

20.[A] funny [B]simple [C]logical [D] rare

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第21题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Section II Reading Comprehension

Part A

Directions:

Read the following four texts,Answer the questions below each text by choosing A, B,C or D.Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET.(40 points)

Text1

A new study suggests that contrary to most surveys, people are actually more stressed at hom than at work.Researchers measured people's cortisol, which is a stress marker,while they were at work and while they were at home and found it higher at what is supposed to be a place of refuge.

"Further contradicting conventional wisdom,we found that women as well as men have lower levels of stress at work than at home," writes one of the researchers, Sarah Damske.In fact women even say they feel better at work, she notes."It is men,not women, who report being happier at home than at work." Another surprise is that findings hold true for both those with children and without,but more so for nonparents. This is why people who work outside the home have better health.

What the study doesn' t measure is whether people are still doing work when they' re at home, whe ther it is household work or work brought home from the office.For many men,the end of the workday is a time to kick back. For women who stay home, they never get to leave the office. And for women who work outside the home, they often are playing catch-up-with-household tasks. With the blurring of roles, and the fact that the home front lags well behind the workplace a making ad justments for working women, it's not surprising that women are more stressed at home.

But it's not just a gender thing. At work,people pretty much know what they' re supposed to be doing: working, marking money, doing the tasks they have to do in order to draw an income. The bargain is very pure: Employee puts in hours of physical or mental labor and employee draws out life-sustaining moola.

On the home front,however,people have no such clarity. Rare is the household in which the division of labor is so clinically and methodically laid out. There are a lot of tasks to be done, there are inadequate rewards for most of them. Your home colleagues-your family-have no clear rewards for their labor; they need to be talked into it,or if they' re teenagers, threatened with complete removal of all electronic devices. Plus, they' re your family. You cannot fire your family.You never really get to go home from home.

So it's not surprising that people are more stressed at home. Not only are the tasks apparently infinite, the co-workers are much harder to motivate.

21.According to Paragraph 1, most previous surveys found that home

[A] offered greater relaxation than the workplace

[B] was an ideal place for stress measurement

[C] generated more stress than the workplace

[D] was an unrealistic place for relaxation

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第22题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

22. According to Damaske,who are likely to be the happiest at home?

[A] Childless wives

[B] Working mothers

[C] Childless husbands

[D] Working fathers

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第23题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

23. The blurring of working women's roles refers to the fact that

[A] it is difficult for them to leave their office

[B] their home is also a place for kicking back there is often much housework left behind

[D] they are both bread winners and housewives

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第24题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

24.The word "moola"(Line4, Para4) most probably means

[A] skil1s

[B] energy

[C] earnings

[D] nutrition

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第25题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

25. The home front differs from the workplace in that

[A] division of labor at home is seldom clear-cut

[B] home is hardly a cozier working environment

[C] household tasks are generally more motivating

[D] family labor is often adequately rewarded

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第26题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text2

For years,studies have found that first-generation college students- those who do not have a parent with a college degree- lag other students on a range of education achievement factors. Their grades are lower and their dropout rates are higher. But since such students are most likely to advance economically if they succeed in higher education, colleges and universities have pushed for decades to recruit more of them. This has created"a paradox" in that recruiting firstgeneration students,but then watching many of them fail,means that higher education has " continued to reproduce and widen, rather than close"ab achievement gap based on social class, according to the depressing beginning of a paper forthcoming in the journal Psychological Science.

But the article is actually quite optimistic,as it outlines a potential solution to this problem,suggesting that an approach (which involves a one-hour,next-tono-cost program) can close 63 percent of the achievement gap (measured by such factors as grades) between first-generation and other students.

The authors of the paper are from different universities, and their findings are based on a study involving 147 students (who completed the pro,ject)at an unnamed private university. First generation was defined as not having a parent with a four-year college degree. Most of the first-generation students(59.1 percent) were recipients of Pell Grants,a federal grant for undergraduates with financial need, while this was true only for 8.6 percent of the students wit at least one parent with a four-year degree.

Their thesis- that a relatively modest intervention could have a big impact- was based or the view that first-generation students may be most lacking not in potential but in practical knowledge about how to deal with the issues that face most college students. They cite past research by several authors to show that this is the gap that must be narrowed to close the achievement gap.

Many first- generation students"struggle to navigate the middle-class culture of higher education, learn the 'rules of the game,' and take advantage of college resources," they write. And this becomes more of a problem when collages don't talk about the class advantage and disadvantages of different groups of students. Because US colleges and universities seldom acknowledge how social class can affect students'educational experience, many first-generation students lack sight about why they are struggling and do not understand how students' like them can improve.

26. Recruiting more first- generation students has

[A] reduced their dropout rates

[B] narrowed the achievement gap

[C] missed its original purpose

[D] depressed college students

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第27题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

27. The author of the research article are optimistic because

[A] the problem is solvable

[B] their approach is costless

[C] the recruiting rate has increased

[D] their finding appeal to students

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第28题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

28.The study suggests that most first- generation students

[A] study at private universities

[B] are from single-parent families

[C] are in need of financial support

[D] have failed their college

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第29题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

29. The author of the paper believe that first-generation students

[A] are actually indifferent to the achievement gap

[B] can have a potential influence on other students

[C] may lack opportunities to apply for research projects

[D] are inexperienced in handling their issues at college

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第30题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

30. We may infer from the last paragraph that

[A] universities often reject the culture of the middle-class

[B] colleges are partly responsible for the problem in question

[C] social classes greatly help en rich educational experiences

[D] political factors may hinder the educational progress

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第31题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text3

There is no question that the speech of the American office is changing. One lingual expert称之为"the lingua franca of corporate America" is what has come to be called "office speak".

Consider the phrases: "Let's touch base," "Let's circle back," "Let's take it offline," "No brainer," "Thought shower," "Bottom line," "At the end of the day." These terms are now commonly used in the workplace, and they are often used by both managers and subordinates.

In a recent paper, Professor Nancy Koehn of Harvard Business School noted that the language of corporate America has become more emotional and much more right-brained than it was 20 years ago. "You have the importation of terminology that historically used to be associated with non-profit organizations and religious organizations: Terms like vision, values, passion,and purpose,"said Khurana.

This new focus on personal fulfillment can help keep employees motivated amid increasingly loud debates over work-life balance.The" mommy wars"of the 1990s are still going on today, prompting arguments about why women still can't have it all and books like Shery 1 Sandberg' s Lean In,whose title has become a buzzword in its own right. Terms like unplug,offline, life-hack, bandwidth, and capacity are all about setting boundaries between the office and the home. But if your work is your " passion,"you'11 be more likely to devote yourself to it, even if that means going home for dinner and then working long after the kids are in bed.

But this seems to be the irony of office speak: Everyone makes fun of it,but managers love it,companies depend on it,and regular people willingly absorb it.As Nunberg said,"You can get people to think it's nonsense at the same time that you buy into it."In a workplace that' s fundamentally indifferent to your life and its meaning, office speak can help you figure out how you relate to your work-and how your work defines who you are.

31.According to Naney Koehn,office language has become

[A] more emotional

[B] more objective

[C] less energetic

[D] less strategic

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第32题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

32."Team"-oriented corporate vocabulary is closely related to.

[A] historical incidents

[B] gender difference

[C] sports culture

[D] athletic executives

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第33题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

33. Khurana believes that the importation of terminology aims to

[A] revive historical terms

[B] promote company image

[C] foster corporate cooperation

[D] strengthen emp1oyee loyalty

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第34题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

34. It can be inferred that Lean In

[A] voices for working women

[B] appeals to passionate workaholics

[C] triggers debates among mommies

[D] praises motivated emp loyees

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第35题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

35.Which of the following statements is true about office speak?

[A] Managers admire it but avoid it

[B] Linguists believe it to be nonsense

[C] Companies find it to be fundamental

[D] Regular people mock it but accept it

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第36题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

Text4

Many people talked of the 288, 000 new jobs the Labor Department reported for June,along with the drop in the unemployment rate to 6.1 percent,as good news.And they were right. For now it appears the economy is creating jobs at a decent pace. We still have a long way to go to get back to full employment,but at least we are now finally moving forward at a faster pace.

However,there is another important part of the jobs picture that was largely overlooked. There was a big jump in the number of people who repot voluntarily working part-time.This figure is now 830, 000(4.4 percent)above its year ago level.

Before explaining the connection to the Obamacare, it is worth making an important distinction. Many people who work part-time jobs actually want full-time jobs.They take part-time work because this is all they can get.An increase in involuntary part-time work is evidence of weakness in the labor market and it means that many people will be having a very hard time making ends meet.

There was an increase in involuntary part-time in June, but the general direction has been down.Involuntary part-time employment is still far higher than before the recession,but it is down by 640,000(7.9percent)from is year ago level.

We know the difference between voluntary and involuntary part-time employment because people tell us.The survey used by the Labor Department asks people is they worked less than 35 hours in the reference week.If the answer is" yes",they are classified as worked less than 35hours in that week because they wanted to work less than full time or because they had no choice.They are only classified as voluntary part-time workers if they tell the survey taker they chose to work less than 35 hours a week.

The issue of voluntary part-time relates to Obamacare because one of the main purposes was to allow people to get insurance outside of employment. For many people,especially those with serious health conditions or family members with serious health conditions, before Obamacare the only way to get insurance was through a job that provided health insurance.

However, Obamacare has alowed more than 12 million people to either get insurance through Medicaid or the exchanges. These are people who may previously have felt the need to get a full-time job that provided insurance in order to cover themselves and their families.With Obamacare there is no longer a link between employment and insurance.

36.Which part of the jobs picture are neglected?

[A] The prospect of a thriving job market.

[B] The increase of voluntary part-time market.

[C] The possibility of full employment.

[D] The acceleration of job creation.

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第37题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

37. Many people work part-time because they.

[A] prefer part-time jobs to full-time_jobs.

[B] feel that is enough to make ends meet.

[C] cannot get their hands on full-time jobs

[D] haven't seen the weakness of the market.

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第38题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

38.Involuntary part-time employment is the US

[A] is harder to acquire than one year ago.

[B] shows a general tendency of decline.

[C] satisfies the real need of the jobless.

[D] is lower than before the recession.

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第39题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

39.It can be learned that with Obamacare,

[A] it is no longer easy for part-timers to get insurance

[B] emp1oyment is no longer a precondition to get insurance

[C] it is still challenging to get insurance for family members

[D] ful1-time employment is still essential for insurance

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第40题 阅读理解 单选题 题目链接

40.The text mainly discusses

[A] employment in the US

[B] part-timer classification

[C] insurance though Medicaid

[D] Obamacare's trouble

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第41题 阅读理解 综合题 题目链接

Section Ⅱ Part B

Directions:

In the following text,some sentences have been removed.For Questions 41-45,choose the most suitable one from the list [A]-[G] to fit into each of the numbered blank. There are two extra choices,which do not fit in any of the gaps. Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET.(10 points)

[A] You are not alone

[B] Don't fear responsibility for your life

[C] Pave your own unique path

[D] Most of your fears are unreal

[E]Think about the present moment

[F] Experience helps you grow

[G] There are many things to be grateful for

Unfortunately, life is not a bed of roses.We are going through life facing sad experiences. Moreover,we are grieving various kinds of loss: a friendship, a romantic relationship or a house. Hard times may hold you down at what usually seems like the most inopportune time, but you should remember that they won't last forever.

When our time of mourning is over,we press forward, stronger with a greater understanding and respect for life. Furthermore, these losses make us mature and eventually move us toward future opportunities for growth and happiness. I want to share these ten old truths I' ve learned along the way.

41._______________

Fear is both useful and harnful.This normal human reaction is used to protect us by signaling danger and preparing us to deal with it. Unfortunately, people create inner barriers with a help of exaggerating fears. My favorite actor Will Smith once said, "Fear is not real.It is a product of thoughts you create.Do not misunderstand me. Danger is very real.But fear is a choice." I do completely agree that fears are just the product of our luxuriant imagination.

42._______________

If you are surrounded by problems and cannot stop thinking about the past, try to focus on the present moment. Many of us are weighed down by the past or anxious about the future. You may feel guilt over your past,but you are poisoning the present with the things and circumstances you cannot change. Value the present moment and remember how fortunate you are to be alive. Enjoy the beauty of the world around and keep the eyes open to see the possibilities before you.Happiness is not a point of future and not a moment from the past,but a mindset that can be designed into the present.

43._______________

Sometimes it is easy to feel bad because you are going through tough times. You can be easily caught up by life problems that you forget to pause and appreciate the things you have. Only strong people prefer to smile and value their life instead of crying and complaining about something.

44._______________

No matter how isolated you might feel and how serious the situation is,you should always remember that you are not alone.Try to keep in mind that almost everyone respects and wants to help you if you are trying to make a good change in your life, especially your dearest and nearest people. You may have a circle of friends who provide constant good humor,help and companionship. If you have no friends or relatives, try to participate in several online communities, full of people who are always willing to share advice and encouragement.

45._______________

Today many people find it difficult to trust their own opinion and seek balance by gaining objectivity from external sources. This way you devalue your opinion and show that you are incapable of managing your own life. When you are struggling to achieve something important you should believe in yourself and be sure that your decision is the best. You live in your skin, think your own thoughts, have your own values and make your own choices.

(请将41-45题的答案填入下方的输入框,不区分大小写)

你的答案:

DEGAC


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:D。与标准答案41.D一致。该段首句点明“Fear is both useful and harmful”,并引用Will Smith的话说明恐惧是思想的产物,与选项D“Most of your fears are unreal”主旨相符。得2分。

(2)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:E。与标准答案42.E一致。该段核心是劝告人们“focus on the present moment”,并详细阐述了关注当下的重要性,与选项E“Think about the present moment”完全对应。得2分。

(3)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:G。与标准答案43.G一致。该段指出在困难时期容易忘记欣赏已拥有的事物,并强调坚强的人会选择微笑和珍惜生命,与选项G“There are many things to be grateful for”(心怀感恩)的核心思想匹配。得2分。

(4)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:A。与标准答案44.A一致。该段反复强调“you are not alone”,并列举了朋友、亲人、网络社区等支持来源,与选项A“You are not alone”直接对应。得2分。

(5)得分及理由(满分2分)

学生答案:C。与标准答案45.C一致。该段批评了人们过于依赖外部意见而贬低自我判断的现象,并鼓励相信自己的观点、价值和选择,与选项C“Pave your own unique path”(走自己独特的路)含义一致。得2分。

题目总分:2+2+2+2+2=10分

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第42题 翻译 综合题 题目链接

Section III Translation

46. Directions:

Translate the following text into Chinese. Write your translation on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

Think about driving a route that's very familiar. It could be your commute to work, a trip into town or the way home. Whichever it is, you know every twist and turn like the back of your hand. On these sorts of trips it's easy to lose concentration on the driving and pay little attention to the passing scenery. The consequence is that you perceive that the trip has taken less time than it actually has.

This is the well-travelled road effect: People tend to underestimate the time it takes to travel a familiar route.

The effect is caused by the way we allocate our attention. When we travel down a well-known route, because we don't have to concentrate much, time seems to flow more quickly. And afterwards, when we come to think back on it, we can't remember the journey well because we didn't pay much attention to it. So we assume it was shorter.

你的答案:


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分15分)

学生两次识别的译文整体上准确传达了原文的核心信息,包括“熟路效应”的定义、表现及其成因。主要意思与标准答案一致,没有出现逻辑错误。在细节表达上存在一些差异,例如“交通道路效应”(应为“熟路效应”)、“在你的记忆指导当中/掌控当中”(应为“了如指掌”)、“更少地集中在开车驾驶上”(应为“容易专注于驾驶”或“容易不专注于驾驶”,但结合上下文可理解)等。这些差异属于用词不够精准或表达不够地道,但并未造成严重的语义偏差或逻辑错误。根据翻译评分的一般原则(如考研英语翻译评分标准),此类不影响核心理解的表达问题通常扣1-2分。综合考量,本次翻译质量良好,给予13分。

题目总分:13分

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第43题 写作 综合题 题目链接

Section IV Writing

Part A

47. Directions:

Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to

1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and
2) call for volunteers.

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your name or the name of your university.
Do not write your address. (10 points)

你的答案:


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分10分)

本题为应用文写作,要求写一则关于大学为高中生举办夏令营并招募志愿者的通知。根据评分标准,对该生作答评判如下:

内容要点覆盖: 题目要求两点:1) 简要介绍夏令营活动;2) 招募志愿者。学生作答中提到了“introductions about our university for high school students”作为活动内容,并详细列出了对志愿者的要求(流利中文、标准普通话、沟通表达能力、积极主动)。内容基本覆盖了要点,但夏令营活动的介绍过于单一和简略,未能充分展开介绍“camp activities”(如日程、具体项目等)。存在次要要点遗漏。

语言与语法: 语言基本通顺,但存在一些语法和用词错误。例如:“a fluent Chinese”(应为fluent Chinese或fluency in Chinese);“standard Putonghua”表达略显生硬;“introduce our university for them”(介词使用不当,应为to them);“it is very interesting for your volunteers' careers.” 这句话逻辑和表达均不清晰,与通知主体衔接生硬。整体上错误对理解造成一定影响,但未达到严重影响的程度。

格式与语域: 格式上,有“Notice”标题和落款日期“June, 8”及署名“University club”,基本符合通知格式,但日期格式“June, 8”不规范(应为June 8或8th June)。语域方面,开头使用“We have an exciting announcement for you! As a student, I am delighted to...” 这种第一人称、带有个人情感的表达,与正式、客观的大学官方通知语域不完全相符,显得不够正式。

逻辑与衔接: 整体逻辑尚可,从宣布消息、介绍活动到招募志愿者。但段落和句子之间的衔接不够紧密,如“Last but not least, this summer camp will have many interesting things.” 之后没有具体说明,紧接着是“Welcome to join us...”,然后突然转到“it is very interesting for your volunteers' careers.”,逻辑断裂,连贯性不足。

综合评定: 该作答内容基本完整但活动介绍不充分,语言有若干错误但不影响核心理解,格式基本正确但语域不够正式恰当,逻辑有一定连贯性但部分衔接生硬。根据评分标准,符合第三档(中等,5-6分)的描述。考虑到其完成了核心任务,但各方面均有明显瑕疵,给予5分

题目总分:5分

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第44题 写作 综合题 题目链接

Part B

48. Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

(图表标题:我国某市居民春节假期花销比例
饼图构成:新年礼物:40%,交通:20%,聚会吃饭:20%,其他:20%)

你的答案:


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分15分)

本题为图表作文,要求解读图表并给出评论。学生作文基本完成了任务:第一段描述了图表主要信息(新年礼物占比最大),第二段对各项花费比例进行了说明,第三段给出了简单结论。文章包含了主要的内容要点(解读图表和评论)。

然而,文章存在以下明显问题:

  1. 语言错误较多且影响理解:开篇“accountments have taken place”用词不当且语法错误;多处存在语法问题,如“people partly spending in gifts”(句子结构不完整)、“party-to-eating”、“go to a visit”等表达不地道或错误;“parent family”属于错误搭配。
  2. 词汇和语法结构单一、有限:全文句式简单,重复使用“account for”等结构,缺乏丰富的语法结构和高级词汇。
  3. 衔接与连贯性不足:段落内部和段落之间的衔接手法简单,逻辑推进不够清晰。例如,第二段在解释原因时,将“交通”和“聚会吃饭”简单地归因为“开车加油”和“吃昂贵晚餐”,分析较为表面化,且与图表数据的直接关联性不强。
  4. 评论部分薄弱:结尾的评论“新年假期将变得更有趣”与上文对花费比例的分析逻辑关联不强,显得突兀且缺乏深度。

根据评分标准,该作文漏掉了一些深入分析的要点(如对现象背后社会文化原因的探讨),语言存在较多错误,语法结构和词汇有限,衔接手法简单。这些特点符合第四档(5-8分)的描述:“未能按要求完成试题规定的任务”、“语法结构单调、词汇项目有限”、“有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解”。

综合考虑,给予该作文7分。它处于第四档的中上水平,因为其基本完成了图表描述的任务,主要数据都已提及,整体意思尚可理解,但语言质量和对现象的评论深度明显不足。

题目总分:7分

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