科目组合
英语二: 英语知识运用 、阅读理解 、翻译 、写作
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评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:F。标准答案:F。该段落强调需要反复推广、捍卫自己的计划,并准备应对审查和批评,这符合“Be a salesman”(做一个推销员)的核心含义。答案正确,得2分。
(2)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:G。标准答案:C。该段落讨论的是在提出建议前,可以先与同事或其他利益相关者建立联盟,利用不同的“渠道”(channels)来获取支持并为可能的反对做好准备。学生选择了G(Be humble,保持谦逊),而G的核心在于倾听不同意见、不表现得无所不知,这与本段利用渠道建立联盟的主题不符。答案错误,得0分。
(3)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:A。标准答案:G。该段落指出,提出想法的人如果被视为好辩、防御性强或固执己见,会阻碍他人接受。建议倾听他人关切,理解对方视角,这体现了“Be humble”(保持谦逊)的态度。学生选择了A(Stay positive,保持积极),虽然段落末尾的例子也带有积极色彩,但整段的核心是反对“know-it-all”的态度,强调谦逊和倾听。答案错误,得0分。
(4)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:D。标准答案:B。该段落强调不要为了突出自己的新想法而贬低旧的解决方案,要尊重过去的贡献。这对应“Respect the past”(尊重过去)。学生选择了D(Give it time,给予时间),但段落并未涉及需要等待或给予时间的内容。答案错误,得0分。
(5)得分及理由(满分2分)
学生答案:E。标准答案:A。该段落强调在推销新想法时,要使用积极、乐观的语言,谈论可能性而非问题,这对应“Stay positive”(保持积极)。学生选择了E(Invite resistance,欢迎反对),这与段落倡导的积极、乐观的沟通方式完全相反。答案错误,得0分。
题目总分:2+0+0+0+0=2分
你知道一种时刻——当交谈变得缓慢,最后停止。它是有意识的,并且对于一些人想要停止或继续说什么事情是有意识的。我们能发现这种沉默都很具有压力吗?
研究者们分析这种情况并且探究在交谈期间超过两秒钟的间隔的影响,包括先前研究的一种视角,暗示有意识的沉默带来的恐惧可以变得非常极端使人们避免与陌生人交谈,甚至通过做一些事情来变成享受的经历。
在交谈期间短时间的间隔,人们会感觉到与交谈的对象间更加联系。但是长时间的间隔会感觉到联系下降。长时间的间隔在陌生人之间在顶端会伴随着改变。
但是在朋友之间的交谈是相反的情况。长时间的间隔会增加联系。在朋友之间,长时间的间隔似乎会提供一个自认的时刻对于反应和表达。
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分15分)
学生译文整体上理解了原文大意,但在关键词语的翻译、句子结构的处理以及逻辑连贯性上存在多处明显错误和表达不清的地方,导致信息传递不准确、不流畅。具体扣分点如下:
得分:15 - 11 = 4分
题目总分:4分
Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing well as you receive this letter.I am writing this letter to introduce the play that i am planning it and invite you take part in it.To be specific, the key points are presented as you follows.
First and foremost, the play based on a classic Chinese novel named Jounry to West. It tell a story about four tourists go to west for searching sacred book.Furthermore, in the play you can learing about Chinese traditional culture that can broaded your horizons and improve your cultural ability.Last but not least, you can also communicate with other students about Chinese cultural history.Meeting more friend for you.
I would appreciate it if you can take part in my play. I am looking forward to your early reply.
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
本题为应用文写作,要求学生根据题目要求撰写一封电子邮件。现根据评分标准对该生作答进行评判:
内容要点: 题目要求两点:1. 介绍短剧;2. 邀请朋友参加。学生作答明确提到了剧本基于《西游记》,并进行了简要介绍,同时也发出了邀请。内容基本完整,覆盖了主要要点。但存在一些次要要点表述不清或冗余(如“the key points are presented as you follows”显得生硬且不必要)。
语言表达: 存在较多语法、词汇和搭配错误。例如:“I am writing this letter to introduce the play that i am planning it”(“it”冗余),“invite you take part in it”(缺少“to”),“named Jounry to West”(拼写错误,应为“Journey to the West”),“It tell a story”(主谓一致错误,应为“tells”),“four tourists go to west for searching sacred book”(多个语法和冠词错误),“learing”(拼写错误),“broaded”(拼写错误,应为“broaden”),“cultural ability”(搭配不当),“Meeting more friend for you”(不完整句,逻辑不清)。这些错误在一定程度上影响了理解的流畅性。
格式与语域: 格式基本正确,有称呼、正文和结尾敬语。语域总体为非正式的朋友间通信,基本恰当,但开头“I am writing this letter to...”略显正式,与“Dear Jack”的称呼结合后尚可接受。结尾未按要求使用“Li Ming”署名,而是直接结束,这是一个明显的格式错误。
逻辑与衔接: 使用了“First and foremost”,“Furthermore”,“Last but not least”等连接词,逻辑框架清晰。但部分句子内部逻辑和衔接不够自然(如“Meeting more friend for you”与前文脱节)。
综合评定: 该作答内容基本完整,但语言错误较多且明显,格式上存在署名缺失的问题。根据评分标准,这符合第三档(中等,5-6分)的描述:“内容基本完整,主要要点存在”、“语言错误较多(如语法、词汇、搭配问题),但句子基本可理解”、“格式存在部分错误”。考虑到错误的数量和性质(部分影响理解),以及格式错误,给予该作答5分。
题目总分:5分
What is clearly presented in the chart above is that significant changes have taken place in the statistics regarding older people relaxation activities. Based on the data given, wathcing Tv takes the lead with the highest percentage of 90.8, creating a distinct advantage. In contrast, the figures for walking and planting flowers are relatively lower, standing at 68.3 and 34.7 respectively. Overall, although the data varies, this chart indicates that relaxation activity has successfully captured public attention and become a hot topic recently.
Simple as the chart looks, it reveals a complex social phenomenon that is by no means accidental. First and foremost, with the rapid development of the economy and society, our living environment has undergone profound changes, which provides the soil for the emergence of watching tv. Furthermore, the widespread use of the Internet and mass media has played a key role; they not only amplify the influence of this issue but also make realaxation activity a necessary part of public discussion. Last but not least, the change in people's concepts cannot be ignored. Whether for material pursuit or spiritual needs, modern people are increasingly inclined to pay close attention to relaxation.
In view of the analysis above, it is high time that we took effective measures regarding this issue. On the one hand, the authorities and mass media should issue relevant regulations or guidelines to guide the public properly. On the other hand, as individuals, we should bear in mind that a rational attitude towards relaxation activity is essential. Only in this way can we resolve the problem and enjoy a better future.
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分15分)
该作文未能很好地完成试题规定的任务。具体分析如下:
根据评分标准,该作文未能清楚地传达图表信息,遗漏并错误阐述内容要点,加入无关内容,连贯性差。应归入第四档(5-8分)。考虑到其语言基础尚可但内容严重偏题,给予6分。
题目总分:6分