Notice
December 1,2025
To enrich students'extracurricular life, university will host a summer camp. The notice aims to introduce some details of this activity. The activity is to be held in Beijing University on December 10,2025. We will invite many students and teachers from other universities. The summer camp such as English lecture and English contest will be held to inspire students' learning enthusiasm. Additionally, in order to ensure the smooth progress of the activity, we need three volunteers who have organizational and communication skills. Welcome to join us. If you are invested in this activity,please do not hesitate to email us at 123456 @qq.com.
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评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分2.5分）：得分2分
理由：内容基本覆盖要点（夏令营活动通知、时间地点、活动内容、志愿者招募、联系方式），但存在细节问题：活动时间矛盾（通知日期2025年12月1日与活动日期2025年12月10日不符合"暑假"夏令营逻辑），且"summer camp"与12月时间冲突属于逻辑错误。次要要点如具体活动形式表述不够清晰。
（2）语言表达（满分2.5分）：得分2分
理由：语言基本通顺但存在明显错误：①"invested in"应为"interested in"用词错误；②"such as"位置不当导致歧义；③"Beijing...
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