Notice
December 1,2025
To enrich students'extracurricular life, university will host a summer camp. The notice aims to introduce some details of this activity. The activity is to be held in Beijing University on December 10,2025. We will invite many students and teachers from other universities. The summer camp such as English lecture and English contest will be held to inspire students' learning enthusiasm. Additionally, in order to ensure the smooth progress of the activity, we need three volunteers who have organizational and communication skills. Welcome to join us. If you are invested in this activity,please do not hesitate to email us at 123456 @qq.com.
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评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分2.5分）：得分1.5分
理由：内容基本覆盖了夏令营活动的主要信息（目的、时间、地点、活动内容、志愿者需求、联系方式），但存在细节错误。题目要求是2015年英语二小作文（实际应为通知类应用文），但学生将时间写为2025年12月10日（与通知日期2025年12月1日矛盾），且夏令营（summer camp）在12月举行不符合逻辑，属于内容合理性错误。要点完整但存在明显逻辑矛盾。
（2）语言质量（满分2.5分）：得分1.5分
理由：语言基本通顺，但存在多处语法和用词错误。例如："university"前缺少冠词（应为"th...
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