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Dear Jack,
I sincerely appreciate your congratulations on my translation contest victory. For your request, I would give you some suggestions so as to help you.
First of all, I wonder if you can communication with others, so that you can acquire authentic language expressions. If can foster your oral express. Additionally, with the development of the techology, it is convenient for you to learn translation lessons on online platforms. Finally, no matter which method you use, I believe that consistent effort is key to satisfactory outcome.
I hope you find these suggestions enlightening. Looking forward to you:
Yours faithfully, Zhang Wei
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分2.5分)
得分:1.5分
理由:内容基本覆盖要点(感谢祝贺+提出建议),但建议部分存在逻辑模糊(如"communication with others"与翻译能力的直接关联性不明确),且未明确针对翻译学习提出具体方法(如词汇积累、文化背景学习等)。次要要点(如具体学习资源或实践方法)有遗漏。
(2)语言准确性(满分2.5分)
得分:1.5分
理由:存在多处语法和词汇错误:
- "communication"(应为动词communicate)
- "If can foster"(缺主语,应为It can foster)
- "express"(应为名词e...
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