Dear Professor Williams,
With the sincere appreciation for your invitation. I'd like to answer your invitation regarding giving a presentation about Chinese culture to international students.
Firstly,I accept the invitation and will arrive there timely tomorrow. Next, I would like to introduce the key appoints of my presentation. First of all, I will show our Chinese culture such as Spring Festival, poems and so on. I believe that them are interested in these culture. Additionally, I also share my experience about I participated in poem race.
It is hoped that my reply will be at help and please email me. If you have any further questions.
Yours faithfully, Zhang Wei.
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分2.5分）：得分2分
内容基本覆盖要点：接受邀请、确认时间、介绍演讲要点。但遗漏了具体时间（仅提到"tomorrow"未说明具体时段）和文化细节（如Spring Festival和poems过于笼统），次要要点（如具体文化元素描述）不够充分。
（2）语言表达（满分2.5分）：得分1.5分
存在多处语法和词汇错误：例如"With the sincere appreciation..."为残句，"I believe that them are interested"（应为they are），"poem race"...
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