Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing to sincerely apology for my absence at tomorrow's meeting. The issues I countered are as follow:
First of all, due to the railway disruption, it is very difficult for me to rebook my train ticket in time. What's more, my teacher has just assigned me an urgent task that requires my immediate attention tomorrow. Given these problems, I kindly request to reschedule our meeting. Would next Friday be convenient for you?
Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused.
Yours faithfully, Li Ming.
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分4分）
得分：3分
理由：学生覆盖了所有核心要点（道歉、解释原因、建议未来会面），但解释部分略显简略（仅提到铁路中断和紧急任务，缺乏细节），且未明确提及"取消旅行计划"这一背景，属于次要要点遗漏。
（2）语言表达（满分3分）
得分：2分
理由：存在多处语言错误：①"apology"应为动词形式"apologize"；②"countered"拼写错误（应为"encountered"）；③"as follow"语法错误（应为"as follows"）；④"rebook my train ticket"搭配不够自然（更常用"book a new ticket"）。但整体意思仍可理解。
（3）格式与语域（满分3分）
得分：2.5分
理由：格式基本正确（称呼、段落分隔、落款完整），但存在以下问题：...
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