Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing to tell you something about this debate
My theme of city in debate is"Whether reduce the time of traffic lights". I would like to tell you the reason why I choose it. First of all, an increasing number of people hate spending a long time in parking. But shorter time of traffic lights may cause some traffic accident. Next, I will hold this debate in Center Building at 8:00 PM on December 1, 2025.
I hope you find these arrangement enlighting. Looking forward to you.
Yours faithfully, Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分5分）：得分3分
理由：学生基本覆盖了题目要求的两个要点（建议具体话题及理由、告知安排），但存在明显问题。建议的话题是“是否减少交通灯时间”，理由部分提到了“人们讨厌长时间停车”和“缩短时间可能导致事故”，但逻辑混乱（停车等待与交通灯时间关联性不明确），且理由不够充分具体。安排部分明确了时间地点，符合要求。但邮件开头未直接表明目的，结尾缺少必要礼貌用语。
（2）语言表达（满分3分）：得分1.5分
理由：语言错误较多且影响理解。例如："theme of city in debate"应为"debate topic on city traffic"；"spending a long time in parking"表意不清（可能指等待停车或红灯）；"cause some traffic accident"缺少冠词（应为"traffic accidents"）；结尾"enlighting"...
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