Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing to tell you something about this debate
My theme of city in debate is"Whether reduce the time of traffic lights". I would like to tell you the reason why I choose it. First of all, an increasing number of people hate spending a long time in parking. But shorter time of traffic lights may cause some traffic accident. Next, I will hold this debate in Center Building at 8:00 PM on December 1, 2025.
I hope you find these arrangement enlighting. Looking forward to you.
Yours faithfully, Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分4分）：得分2分
理由：题目要求包含两个要点：建议具体辩论主题及理由，以及告知安排。学生虽然提到了主题（"Whether reduce the time of traffic lights"）和安排（时间地点），但理由部分不充分且逻辑混乱（例如"people hate spending a long time in parking"与交通灯时长无直接关联，且未明确说明辩论主题的价值）。此外，次要要点如具体理由的论证较弱，因此扣分。
（2）语言表达（满分3分）：得分1分
理由：语言错误较多且影响理解，例如语法错误（"theme of city in debate"应为"theme for the debate"；"reduce"前缺少"to"；"spending a long time in parking"表达不准确；"cause some traffic accident"单复数错...
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