Dear Student,
I am writing to invite you sincerely to participate in a campus food festival. The activity will take place in Beijing university at 8:00 PM on 1st August 2025. The food festival aims to inspire students' enthusiasm for food.
Next, I'd like to introduce some details of this food festival. First of all, the activity is predicted to attract a considerable number of students and teachers. During the food festival, you will have the opportunities to enjoy food from different countries and connect with fellow food enthusiasts.
I would be very pleased if you could honor us with your presence.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming.
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
本题为应用文写作，满分10分。根据评分标准，该作答内容基本完整，覆盖了活动介绍和邀请参与两个核心要点，但存在以下问题：
1. 语言表达存在语法和用词错误（如"Beijing university"未大写专有名词应为"Beijing University"；"inspire enthusiasm"搭配不够自然；"predicted to attract"语气过于客观，不符合邀请函的积极语气）；
2. 格式基本正确但存在空行过多的问题；
3. 语域总体恰当，但部分表达（如"honor us with your presence"）过于正式，与校园活动邀请的轻松氛围稍有不符...
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