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Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing this email to apologize for not being able to visit you as we previously planned.
There has been a tragic accident today where I was hit by a car while crossing the street. Unfortunately, my leg was fractured and I was told at elast two months are required for my leg to recover and be able to walk again.
I am sorry if such unforseen event had messed up your agenda. If possible, may I suggest scheduling another visit three months from now, after I have recovered? We can confirm the date later if you like.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分4分):得分4分
学生作答完整覆盖题目两个要点:1) 道歉并解释取消旅行计划的原因(车祸导致骨折);2) 建议未来会面(提议三个月后再次拜访)。内容详实合理,无要点遗漏。
(2)语言表达(满分3分):得分2.5分
语言整体流畅自然,但存在两处轻微错误:1) "at elast" 应为 "at least"(拼写错误);2) "had messed up" 时态使用稍显不自然,建议改为 "has messed up" 或 "will mess up"。错误不影响理解,但需扣0.5分。
(3)格式与语域(满分3分):得分3分
格式完全正确:包含称呼(Dear Professor Smith)、正文分段、结束语(Yours sincerely)及签名(Li Ming)。语域正式得体,符合给教授写信的语境要求。
题目总分:4...
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