Dear Jack,
It gives me immense pleasure to do a survey on the protection of old houses in an ancient town with you.I’ll like to share my plan.
First of all,it is significant for we to learn the information about the old houses, which can help us to make more clear plan accord to these information. Additionally, we really need to communicate with local residents, we can acquire more its history from them. Finally, we should enter the old houses which can help us to know its structure and condition now. Do you agree my plan?
Looking forward to you,I hope you can offer some suggestion to me.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
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