Dear John,
I am writing to the letter to invite you to participate in a short play based on a classic Chinese novel, which will be held in playground at 8:00 PM on December 1, 2025.
The play aims to help students to learn classic Chinese novel. The activity is predicted to attract a considerable of students and teachers. The play such as novel Dae and lecture will be held to inspire students' enthusiasm for classic Chinese novel. Additionally, during the play, you will have many opportunities to meet like-minded individuals, engage in interesting activities and enjoy a great time together.
I would be very pleased if you could honor me with your presence.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容要点：得分3分（满分5分）
理由：内容部分覆盖了题目要求。学生介绍了戏剧的基本信息（基于中国古典小说，时间地点）并发出邀请，但未能明确说明戏剧的具体名称或内容（如《红楼梦》《三国演义》等），且第二段关于活动目的的表述存在逻辑混乱（如“play such as novel Dae and lecture”表述不清）。主要要点（介绍戏剧和邀请参与）存在但次要要点（如戏剧名称、具体角色邀请）缺失较严重。
（2）语言表达：得分2分（满分3分）
理由：语言错误较多且影...
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