评分及理由

（1）得分及理由（满分15分）

该翻译在整体上传达了原文的基本意思，但在细节和准确性上存在多处偏差。具体扣分点如下：

• "My dream has always been to work somewhere in an area between fashion and publishing." 被译为"我的梦想总是工作在时尚和出版业的交叉点。"，其中"总是"不如"一直"准确，"交叉点"虽可接受，但不如"之间的领域"贴切。此处有小偏差，但不影响核心意思，不扣分。
• "Two years before graduating from secondary school, I took a sewing and design course thinking that I would move on to a fashion design course." 被误译为"在大学，我选择了服装设计课程。"，此处存在严重逻辑错误，将"中学毕业前两年"错误地译为"在大学"，且遗漏了"缝纫与设计课"和"接着修时装设计课"的关键信息。扣2分。
• "I was not good enough in this area to compete with other creative personalities in the future" 被译为"我在未来有创造性和风格的人在这个领域中竞争是不够的"，此句翻译生硬且不准确，"creative personalities"应译为"有创造力的人士"，学生译文表达不清。扣1分。
• "Before applying for university I told everyone that I would study journalism" 被译为"在开始申请大学之前，我告诉所有人我将选择新闻专业"，此处"申请大学"译为"开始申请大学"有小偏差，但可接受，不扣分。
• "because writing was, and still is, one of my favourite activities" 被译为"因为写作一直都是我最喜欢的活动之一"，此处翻译准确，不扣分。
• "I thought that fashion and me together was just a dream" 被译为"我认...