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Dear Paul,
Thank you for your enthusiastic email. I am writing this email to provide the details and ask for your help regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration.
The young craftsmen will showcase two amazing skills: the art of creating intricate paper-cuttings and the process of making traditional clay figurines with a modern twist.We are confident that this will bring significant benefits to all parties involved by promoting our traditional culture.
Regarding the preparation, it would be highly appreciated if you could help us set up the exhibition area and welcome the guests on that day.
Your involvement is the key to the success of this endeavor.
I am looking forward to working with you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分3分)
得分:3分
理由:内容完整覆盖所有要点。明确回答了Paul询问的两个问题:具体展示了哪些手工艺(剪纸和泥塑),以及需要Paul做什么准备(布置展区和迎接客人)。同时表达了感谢和期待,符合书信要求。
(2)语言表达(满分4分)
得分:3.5分
理由:语言自然流畅,句式多样,使用了"intricate paper-cuttings"、"tradi...
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