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Dear Paul,
Thank you for your email regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration. I am writing to provide you with further details and address your inquiries
The young craftsmen will showcase two amazing skills: the art of creating intricate paper-cuttings and the process of making traditional clay figurines with a modern twist.We are confident that this will bring significant benefits to all parties involved by promoting our traditional culture.
Regarding the preparation, it would be highly appreciated if you could help us set up the exhibition area and welcome the guests on that day.
Your involvement is the key to the success of this endeavor.
I am looking forward to working with you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分3分)
得分:3分
理由:回复内容完整覆盖了Paul邮件中的所有要点。明确回答了"what they'll show"(剪纸和泥塑),并对"help with preparation work"提出了具体请求(布置展区和接待嘉宾)。内容组织符合书信回复要求。
(2)语言表达(满分4分)
得分:3.5分
理由:语言流畅自然,句式多样,使用了"intricate paper-cuttings"、"...
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