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Dear Paul,
Thank you for your email regarding your assignment on an ancient Chinese scientist. I am writing to provide you with some practical advice.
It is advisable to focus your research on a specific scientist, such as Song Yingxing. This approach is designed to narrow the research scope and establish a solid foundation for your speech. Regarding your request for assistance, we would appreciate it if you could prepare a preliminary outline based on this recommendation.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
该作答在内容方面基本完整,回应了Paul的求助请求,并提供了具体建议(选择特定科学家如宋应星、缩小研究范围、准备初步提纲)。但建议的深度和具体性略显不足,例如未详细说明如何准备口头报告的具体步骤(如资料收集、结构安排、演讲技巧等)。语言表达较为正式流畅,语法和词汇错误极少,符合书信写作的语域要求。格式正确,逻辑清晰。根据评分标准,属于第四档(良好)到第五档(优秀)之间的水平,但由于内容在具体建议的完整性上略有欠缺,扣1分。
题目总分:9分
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