Dear Professor Cook,
Thank you for your email regarding your interest in local attractions. I am writing to provide you with some recommendations.
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容要点（满分3分）
得分：2分
理由：内容基本完整，包含了推荐景点（Ancient Quarter和City Museum）和推荐理由（结合街头文化和历史视角）。但存在关键要点遗漏：题目要求推荐"some tourist attractions"并说明理由，而学生只推荐了两个景点且理由较为笼统；此外，文中提到"this weekend"和"preferred time"等内容与题目要求无关，属于冗余信息。
（2）语言表达（满分4分）
得分：3分
理由：语言基本准确，语法结构正确，使用了"comprehensive experience"、"vibrant street culture"等恰当词汇。但存在少量表达问题，如"this arrangement is designed"稍显生硬，"we would appreciate"中的...
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