Dear Paul,
Thank you for your email regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration. I am writing to provide you with further details.
It is advisable to focus on the two primary skills of modern paper-cutting and innovative clay figurine making. This arrangement is designed to showcase a blend of tradition and modernity and ensure an engaging experience for the audience. Regarding your kind offer to help, we would appreciate it if you could assist with preparing the demonstration materials and guiding attendees on that day.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分3分）：得分3分
回复完整覆盖了Paul邮件中的两个核心问题：具体展示内容（现代剪纸和创新泥塑）和可提供的帮助（准备材料和引导观众）。内容要点明确，无遗漏。
（2）语言表达（满分4分）：得分3.5分
语言流畅自然，句式多样（如"It is advisable to...", "we would appreciate it if..."），词汇使用准确。存在少量可改进处："It is advisable to focus on..."稍显正式，可更口语化；"guiding attendees"中"attendees"在校园活动语境下用"participants"或"students"更贴切。但整体错误极少，不影响理解。
（3）格式与语域（满分3分）：得分3分
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