2017年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Dear Professor Cook,
Thank you for your email regarding your concern about local attractions. I am writing to provide you with 【some recommendations】.【建议】
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming【8分】
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
根据评分标准，该作答存在以下问题：
- 内容要点不完整：题目要求推荐具体旅游景点并说明理由，但文中仅笼统提到"Ancient Quarter and the City Museum"，未具体描述景点特色，也未充分说明推荐理由
- 语言表达存在不当：文中使用"we would appreciate it if you could inform us"等过于正式的商务用语，与给新到任教授推荐景点的语域不太匹配
- 逻辑衔接不够紧密：第二段内容组织较为混乱，既包含景点推荐，又询问参观时间，缺乏清晰的结构
- 格式基本正确：邮件格式完整，署名符合要求
综合考虑，该作答属于第三档（中等）水平，得分为6分。主要扣分点在于内容要点不完整和语域不够恰当。
题目总分：6分
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