2017年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Dear Professor Cook,
Thank you for your email regarding your concern about local attractions. I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
根据评分标准，该作答属于第三档（中等）水平，得分为5分。具体理由如下：
- 内容完整性：基本覆盖了推荐旅游景点的要点（Ancient Quarter和City Museum），但推荐理由不够充分具体（仅提到"combines vibrant street culture with historical perspective"），且未按照题目要求明确说明"reasons for your recommendation"的具体细节。
- 语言表达：语言基本准确，但存在语域问题（如"we would appreciate it if you could inform us"过于正式，不符合个人推荐邮件的语域要求），且句式结构较为单一。
- 格式规范：邮件格式正确，署名符合要求（使用Li Ming）。
- 逻辑结构：逻辑基本清晰，但第二段突然询问"preferred ti...
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