2017年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Thank you for your email regarding your interest in local attractions. I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
根据评分标准，该作答在以下几个方面表现如下：
- 内容完整性：题目要求推荐旅游景点并说明理由。学生提到了"Ancient Quarter"和"City Museum"，但推荐理由较为笼统（"combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective"），没有具体展开每个景点的特色和推荐原因。内容基本覆盖要点但不够充分。
- 语言表达：语言流畅，语法错误极少，用词较为正式得体。
- 格式与语域：邮件格式正确，使用了恰当的正式语域，结尾署名符合要求。
- 逻辑结构：逻辑清晰，衔接自然，符合应用文写作规范。
主要问题在于推荐理由不够具体充分，这属于次要要点遗漏。根据评分标准，这符合第四档（良好）的描述："内容完整，要点明确，但可能有个别次要要点...
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