2017年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Thank you for your email regarding your inquiry about local attractions. I am writing to provide you with further details and address your inquiries.
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
根据评分标准，该作答存在以下问题：
- 内容完整性：题目要求推荐旅游景点并说明理由。学生虽然提到了Ancient Quarter和City Museum，但推荐理由过于笼统（"combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective"），且未提供具体景点特色描述。更重要的是，邮件开头错误地回应了"感谢来信询问"（题目未设定此前提），后半部分还询问教授偏好的参观时间，这与推荐景点的核心任务不符，属于关键要点遗漏和内容偏差。
- 语言表达：语法和词汇使用基本正确，错误极少（如"inquiries"重复使用稍显冗余），但存在语域问题。部分表达过于正式/商务化（如"we would appreciate it if you could inform...
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