2017年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Thank you for your email regarding your interest in local attractions. I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
根据评分标准，该作答属于第四档（良好），得分7分。理由如下：
- 内容完整性：文章基本覆盖了推荐景点和给出理由的要求，提到了Ancient Quarter和City Museum，并说明了"combines vibrant street culture with deep historical perspective"作为推荐理由。但存在次要要点遗漏：没有具体说明景点的特色和具体吸引之处，推荐理由不够充分详细。
- 语言表达：语言基本准确流畅，语法和词汇错误极少，如"regarding your interest in local attractions"表达自然。
- 格式与语域：格式正确，包含称呼、正文、结束语和署名；语域恰当，使用了正式礼貌的表达方式。
- 逻辑结构：逻辑较为清晰，段落衔接合理，但第二段突然询问对方时间安排，与推荐景点的主旨衔接不够紧密。 ...
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