Dear Professor Cook,
Thank you for your email regarding your interest in local attractions. I am writing to provide you with some suggestions
It is advisable to begin your exploration with the Ancient Quarter and the City Museum. This arrangement is designed to offer a comprehensive experience that combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective. Regarding your plan for this weekend, we would appreciate it if you could inform us of your preferred time for the visit.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
该邮件在格式方面基本正确：包含称呼、正文、结束语和署名（使用"Li Ming"），符合邮件写作规范。语言整体自然流畅，语法和词汇错误极少，语域较为正式得体，适合与教授沟通的场景。
然而，在内容完整性上存在明显不足：题目要求推荐旅游景点并说明推荐理由，但学生仅提到"Ancient Quarter and the City Museum"两个景点，未具体描述这些景点的特色，且推荐理由较为笼统（"combines our vibrant street culture with a deep historical perspective"），缺乏具体细节支撑。此外，邮件中突然询问教授"preferred time for the visit"显得突兀，与推荐景点的核心任务关联不强。
根据评分标准，内容完整性和逻辑衔接方面存在缺陷，但语言质量和格式表现良好...
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