Dear Professor,
I am writing to formally invite you to organize a team for the upcoming International Innovation Contest.
It is advisable to include this meaningful event in your academic schedule. This contest is designed to foster cross-cultural collaboration and spark groundbreaking ideas among young global talents. Regarding your potential participation, we would appreciate it if you could confirm your interest and tentative team size by the end of this month.
We are confident that your expertise would greatly enrich this event and look forward to welcoming you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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根据评分标准，该作文在以下方面表现良好：
- 内容完整性：覆盖了邀请教授组织团队参加国际创新竞赛的核心要点，包括活动介绍、邀请意图和回复期限要求。
- 语言质量：整体语言流畅自然，使用了"formally invite"、"foster cross-cultural collaboration"等正式表达，语法错误极少。
- 格式规范：电子邮件格式完整正确，包含称呼、正文、结束语和署名，符合正式书信要求。
- 语域恰当性：采用正式、礼貌的学术交流语气，符合给大学教授写信的语域要求。
但存在一个逻辑问题：第二段开头"It is advisable to include..."的表达稍显生硬，更像是给建议而非发出邀请，这在逻辑衔接上不够自然。此外，对竞赛具体信息的描述可以更详细一些。
基于以上分析，按照评分标准，...
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