2022年考研英语（一）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Dear Professor,
I am writing to formally invite you to organize a team for the upcoming International Innovation Contest.
The primary objective of this contest is to cultivate communication of culture among gobal young generation. We are confident that your distinguished expertise and guidance would immensely contribute to the success and prestige of this event. Regarding your potential participation, we would appreciate it if you could confirm your interest and tentative team size by the end of this month.
We are confident that your expertise would greatly enrich this event and look forward to welcoming you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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