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2025年考研英语(一)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年11月23日 04:57
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Dear Paul,

Thank you for your email regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration. I am writing to provide you with further details

It is advisable to focus on the two primary skills of modern paper-cutting and innovative clay figurine making. This arrangement is designed to showcase a blend of tradition and modernity and ensure an engaging experience for the audience. Regarding your specific interest in kind offer to help, we would appreciate it if you could assist with preparing the demonstration materials and guiding attendees on that day.

Please let me know if you need any further information.

Yours sincerely,

 

Li Ming


评分及理由

(1)内容完整性(满分3分):得分2.5分

学生回复基本覆盖了Paul询问的两个要点:具体展示内容(现代剪纸和创新泥塑)和可以提供的帮助(准备材料和引导观众)。但关于展示内容的描述略显简略,对"innovative"方面的具体特点解释不够充分,属于次要要点遗漏。内容整体完整但不够丰满。

(2)语言表达(满分3分):得分2.5分

语言基本流畅,使用了"regarding"、"It is advisable to"等正式表达。但存在少量语法问题,如"your specific interest in kind offer to help"表述不够通顺,应为"your kind offer to help"。词汇选择总体恰当...

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