Dear Paul,
Thank you for your email regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration. I am writing to provide you with further details
It is advisable to focus on the two primary skills of modern paper-cutting and innovative clay figurine making. This arrangement is designed to showcase a blend of tradition and modernity and ensure an engaging experience for the audience. Regarding your kind offer to help, we would appreciate it if you could assist with preparing the demonstration materials and guiding attendees on that day.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分3分）
得分：3分
理由：回复内容完整覆盖了Paul邮件中的两个核心问题——具体展示内容（现代剪纸和创新泥塑）和可提供的帮助（准备材料和引导观众）。要点明确，无遗漏。
（2）语言表达（满分3分）
得分：2分
理由：语言基本流畅，使用了恰当的书面表达（如"It is advisable to..."）。但存在少量语法问题，如"assist with preparing"建议改为"assist in preparing"更自然。整体错误不影响理解。
（3）格式与语域（满分2分）
得分：2分
理由：邮件格式完整规范（称呼、正文、结束语、签名），语域正式得体，符合同学间正式通信的语境要求。
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