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Dear Sir,
I recently learned about your plans after graduation. Regarding your interest in your planning to find a job in China, I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.
It is advisable to focus on multinational companies or international organizations in major cities like Shanghai or Beijing
This strategy is designed to use your international background as a unique advantage and effectively deal with potential challenges with language and culture.
Regarding your next steps, I would appreciate it if you could share your resume with me, allowing me to recommend you to some contacts in my network.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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该邮件写作在内容完整性方面基本覆盖了要点:表达了得知对方计划、提供了在中国找工作的建议(跨国公司、大城市)、并主动提出帮助。但存在以下问题:
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