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2021年考研英语(一)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年11月23日 05:27
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Dear Friend,

I recently learned about your plans after graduation. Regarding your planning to find a job in China, I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.

It is advisable to focus on multinational companies or international organizations in major cities like Shanghai or Beijing
This arrangement is designed to use your international background as a unique advantage and effectively deal with potential challenges with language and culture.
Regarding your next steps, I would appreciate it if you could share your resume with me, allowing me to recommend you to some contacts in my network.

Please let me know if you need any further information.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分10分)

根据评分标准,该作答属于第四档(良好),得分为7分。理由如下:

  • 内容方面:内容基本完整,覆盖了主要要点(建议在中国找工作的方向、利用国际背景优势、提供帮助),但建议的具体性稍显不足,例如未提及具体行业或更详细的求职策略。
  • 语言方面:语言基本准确,表达流畅,但存在少量语法和用词问题,例如"Regarding your planning"中"planning"使用稍显冗余,应为"plan";"This arrangement is designed to..."句式略显正式和生硬,但整体不影响理解。
  • 格式与语域:格式正确,包含...
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