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Dear Friend,
I recently learned about your plans after graduation. Regarding your plan to find a job in China, I am writing to provide you with some suggestions.
It is advisable to focus on multinational companies or international organizations in major cities like Shanghai or Beijing
This arrangement is designed to use your international background as a unique advantage and effectively deal with potential challenges with language and culture.
Regarding your next steps, I would appreciate it if you could share your resume with me, allowing me to recommend you to some contacts in my network.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
该邮件内容完整,覆盖了所有要点:祝贺毕业、针对在中国找工作的具体建议(跨国公司/国际组织、大城市)、利用国际背景优势、应对语言文化挑战、主动提供帮助(查看简历推荐人脉)。语言自然流畅,语法和词汇错误极少,仅有一处格式上的小问题(第二段首句缺少句号)。格式正确,使用了正式的书信格式和恰当的语域。逻辑清晰,衔接紧密,符合应用文写作规范。根据评分标准,属于第五档(优秀),但存在一处轻微格式瑕疵,因此扣1分。
得分:9分
题目总分:9分
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