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Dear [Volunteer's Name],
Thank you for your email regarding your interest in the "Aiding Rural Primary School" project. I am writing to provide you with detailed information.
It is advisable for you to join our teaching assistance project, which focuses on English and computer skills.
This program is designed to address the educational resource gap in different areas and offer you a meaningful cross-cultural exchange experience.
Regarding your application, we would appreciate it if you could complete the online registration form and submit a brief personal statement by March 5th.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
(1)内容完整性(满分3分):得分2.5分
学生作答基本覆盖了项目的主要信息:项目性质(教学援助)、教学科目(英语和计算机)、项目目标(解决教育资源差距、提供跨文化交流体验)以及申请流程(在线注册和个人陈述)。但未明确提及项目名称"Aiding Rural Primary School"的具体细节,如实施地点、具体活动形式等次要要点有所遗漏。
(2)语言表达(满分3分):得分2.5分
语言整体流畅自然,句式多样(如"It is advisable..."、"we would appreciate it if..."等),语法错误极少。但存在一处表达不够准确:"in...
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