Dear professor,
On behalf of the Student Union, it is with great pleasure that we extend a formal invitation to you to attend the 2025 Graduation Ceremony as our distinguished guest.
The activity will be held at the University Auditorium on May 5th at 2:00 PM. Your presence would be a valuable addition to the occasion, and we are confident it would be mutually rewarding. Please let us know if you have any specific requirements so we may make appropriate arrangements.
Regarding your potential participation, we would appreciate it if you could confirm your interest and provide a tentative indication of your availability by November 1st.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分3分）：得分2分
理由：学生作答包含了时间（May 5th at 2:00 PM）、地点（University Auditorium）等基本信息，但存在明显的逻辑错误。毕业典礼时间（5月5日）与回复截止时间（11月1日）存在严重矛盾，这属于关键信息错误。此外，邀请对象为"professor"（单数），而题目要求是"all international experts"（复数），未完全覆盖要点。
（2）语言表达（满分3分）：得分2分
理由：语言整体流畅，句式多样，但存在用词不当问题。"the activity"指代毕业典礼不够准确，应用"the ceremony"；"mut...
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