Dear all international experts,
On behalf of the Student Union, it is with great pleasure that we extend a formal invitation to you to attend the 2025 Graduation Ceremony as our distinguished guest.
The activity will be held at the University Auditorium on May 5th at 2:00 PM. Your presence would be a valuable addition to the occasion, and we are confident it would be mutually rewarding. Please let us know if you have any specific requirements so we may make appropriate arrangements.
Regarding your potential participation, we would appreciate it if you could confirm your interest and provide a tentative indication of your availability by November 1st.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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该作文在内容完整性方面表现良好，涵盖了毕业典礼的时间（May 5th at 2:00 PM）、地点（University Auditorium）和其他相关信息（邀请确认截止日期November 1st）。语言自然流畅，语法和词汇错误极少，格式正确，使用了正式得体的语域。逻辑清晰，衔接紧密，符合邀请邮件的写作规范。但存在一个逻辑错误：毕业典礼在5月5日举行，但要求专家在11月1日前确认参与，时间安排不合理，这属于明显的逻辑矛盾。因此不能给予满分。
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