Dear Paul,
Thank you for your email regarding the upcoming innovative crafts demonstration. I am writing to provide you with further details
It is advisable to focus on the two primary skills of modern paper-cutting and innovative clay figurine making. This arrangement is designed to showcase a blend of tradition and modernity and ensure an engaging experience for the audience. Regarding your kind offer to help, we would appreciate it if you could assist with preparing the demonstration materials and guiding attendees on that day.
Please let me know if you need any further information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）内容完整性（满分3分）
得分：2分
理由：回复基本覆盖了Paul邮件中的两个问题（展示内容和帮忙准备），具体说明了两种手工艺（现代剪纸和创新泥塑）并提出了协助准备材料和引导观众的要求。但未明确提及活动时间、地点等次要信息，内容略显简略。
（2）语言表达（满分4分）
得分：3分
理由：语言整体流畅，使用了"regarding"、"It is advisable to"等正式表达，符合书信语域。但存在少量语法问题，如"assist with preparing"建议改为"assist in preparing"，"guiding attendees on that day"表述稍显生硬。词汇和句式有一定变化，错误不影响理解。
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