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2014年考研英语(二)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年11月26日 23:43
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Dear John,

 I hope this email finds you well and I am truely excited about studying abroad and sharing the apartment with you. I am writing to briefly introduce my living habits and ask for your valuable advice.

The detail can be listed as follows. To begin with, it is necessary for me to go to bed early, which can help me keep a clear head the next day. Meanwhile, I wonder if you can accept slight noise, so that I can play the guitar in the bedroom. Finally, I would be extremely grateful if you could offer me some advice about living there.

Please don't hesitate to let me know if you have and questions or living habits. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming


评分及理由

(1)内容完整性(满分3分):得分2分

内容基本完整,覆盖了两个主要要点:介绍生活习惯(早睡、弹吉他)和请求生活建议。但第二个要点"请求生活建议"部分过于笼统,没有具体说明需要哪方面的建议,属于次要要点遗漏。因此扣1分。

(2)语言表达(满分4分):得分3分

语言基本流畅,句式有一定变化,但存在以下问题:
- "truely"拼写错误(应为"truly")
- "if you have and questions"语法错误(应为"any questions")
- "The detail can be listed as...

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