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2020年考研英语(二)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年12月3日 20:55
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Dear international students,
As a partner of our group, It gives me immense pleasure to you some tips about this tour, which are useful to our tour experience. The related details are as follows,
First and foremost, the site of this tour is GuangMing countryside, which have various and typical historical culture. Additionally, the tour is to be held by our university at 9a.m on May 1st, which have unique experience if offers, including visiting local residents, capturing the typical buildings and heritages.The profound experience will be memorable and the tour will be very rewardable,
At last, I hope to see your wholehearted participation and make this event a grand success. Looking forward to your presence
Yours sincerely, LiMing.


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分10分)

该学生作答是一封电子邮件,旨在向国际学生介绍一个历史景点并提供游览建议。根据评分标准,评判如下:

  • 内容完整性:题目要求两点:1) 介绍景点;2) 给出游览建议。学生作文提到了景点是“GuangMing countryside”,并描述了其历史文化,以及活动时间、内容(参观居民、拍摄建筑和遗产)。然而,作文严重缺失了第二点“给出游览建议”(tips for the tour)。文中“tips”一词仅在第一段开头出现,但后续并未提供任何具体的、实用的建议...
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