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Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing well as you receive this letter.I am writing this letter to introduce the play that i am planning it and invite you take part in it.To be specific, the key points are presented as you follows.
First and foremost, the play based on a classic Chinese novel named Jounry to West. It tell a story about four tourists go to west for searching sacred book.Furthermore, in the play you can learing about Chinese traditional culture that can broaded your horizons and improve your cultural ability.Last but not least, you can also communicate with other students about Chinese cultural history.Meeting more friend for you.
I would appreciate it if you can take part in my play. I am looking forward to your early reply.
评分及理由
(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
本题为应用文写作,要求学生根据题目要求撰写一封电子邮件。现根据评分标准对该生作答进行评判:
内容要点: 题目要求两点:1. 介绍短剧;2. 邀请朋友参加。学生作答明确提到了剧本基于《西游记》,并进行了简要介绍,同时也发出了邀请。内容基本完整,覆盖了主要要点。但存在一些次要要点表述不清或冗余(如“the key points are presented as you follows”显得生硬且不必要)。
语言表达: 存在较多语法、词汇和搭配...
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