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2025年考研英语(二)考试试题 - 第44题回答
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发布于2025年12月12日 20:08
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The bar chart shows the compistion of the main part-time activities of old?people?in a certain society.The percentage of watching TV,taking a walk,reading books,growing flowers,playing chess accounts for 90.8%,68.3%,34.7%,31.8% and 18.4% respectively.Especially,watching TV ranks the first.

Actually,this seemingly simple chart subtly discloses a prevailing phenomenon that an increasing of old people live sloely.What accounts for this phenomenon?Its a thought-provoking question.To begin with,a lack of attention from their kids on their parents leads that more and more people live sloely.What is more,a lack consciousness of caring old people results in an increasing number of old people live sloely.

Anyhow,whether it is positive or negative,one thing is certain that there is a growing tendency for old people to live sloely,which I believe will not change in our short time.


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(1)得分及理由(满分15分)

根据评分标准,该学生作文存在以下问题:

  1. 内容要点:基本完成了图表描述(第一段),但描述不够精确(如将“日常休闲活动”误写为“part-time activities”,...
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