2023年考研英语（二）考试试题 - 第43题回答
Dear David,
Knowing you strenuous effects to learn Chinese tradition culture, so I do not hesitate hesitate to recommend art exhibition. The reasons for my choice are as follows:
First of all, art exhibition can let you see many poems and paintings with your own eyes and learn the knowledge about romanticism. Additionally, it is extremely important that you can use this platform to make more friends who are as interested in Chinese tradition culture.
If you need more information about art exhibition please let me know.
Yours faithfully, Li Ming.
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
该学生作答的得分是 5分。
打分理由：
- 内容要点： 内容基本完整，覆盖了“提出建议”和“给出理由”两个核心要点。建议是参观艺术展，并给出了两个理由（亲眼观看诗画、结交朋友）。因此，内容方面符合第三档（中等）的描述。
- 语言表达： 存在较多语言错误，影响了表达的流畅性和准确性。例如：“strenuous effects”（应为“strong interest”或“great efforts”）、“I do not hesitate hesitate”（重复错误）、“learn the knowledge about romanticism”（搭配不当，且“浪漫主义”与“中国传统文化”的关联性不强，属于理由不够贴切）、“extremely important that you can use...” (句式略显生硬)。这些错误使得语言...
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