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2024年考研英语(一)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年12月17日 22:17
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Dear Paul,
    I'm LiMing. I'm writing to share my viewpoint towards preparing for an oral report on an ancient Chinese scientist.
    In my opinion, it's advisable for you to take te following options. Fist of all, you can sarch for the information of scientists whom had th same majority as you.Second, pactise to speak out loud so that you won't be nervous on your reporting day. Last but not least,you may call for help from your Chinese teacher, maybe she can give you more suggestions.
    I do hope my suggestions can help you tackle with your oral presentation. I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
LiMing.


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分10分)

该学生作答是一封回复邮件,旨在为Paul准备关于中国古代科学家的口头报告提供建议。根据评分标准,具体分析如下:

  • 内容完整性:回复覆盖了核心要点,即提供了具体建议(如查找信息、练习演讲、寻求老师帮助)。但建议的第一条“查找与你专业相同的科学家信息”与题目要求“中国古代科学家”的关联性不够直接和具体,内容深度稍显不足。整体内容基本完整。
  • 语言准确性:存在多处明显的语法、拼写和用词错误。例如:“take te following options”(应为“take the following suggestions”);“Fist of all”(应为“First of al...
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