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2024年考研英语(一)考试试题 - 第43题回答
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发布于2025年12月17日 22:20
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Dear Paul,
    I'm LiMing. I'm writing to share my viewpoint towards preparing for an oral report on an ancient Chinese scientist.
    In my opinion, it's advisable for you to take te following options. First of all, you can search for the information of scientists who had th same major as you.Second, practise speaking out loud so that you won't be nervous on your reporting day. Last but not least,you may call for help from your Chinese teacher, maybe she can give you more suggestions.
    I do hope my suggestions can help you deal with your oral presentation. I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
LiMing.


评分及理由

(1)得分及理由(满分10分)

该学生作答是一封完整的回信,针对Paul关于准备中国古代科学家口头报告的求助给出了建议。现根据评分标准进行评判:

  • 内容要点:回信覆盖了求助的核心,并给出了具体建议(搜索信息、练习演讲、寻求老师帮助)。但建议的针对性略有不足,例如“搜索与你专业相同的科学家”这一条,对于“中国古代科学家”这一特定主题来说,建议不够具体和直接,可以更聚焦于如何选择科学家、查找可靠资料等方面。因此,内容完整但要点深度稍有欠缺。
  • 语言与语法:语言基本流畅,但存在少量语法和词汇错误,例如:“take te following options”应为“take the following sug...
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