Dear John,
I am writing to the letter to invite you to participate in a short play based on a classic Chinese novel, which will be held in playground at 8:00 PM on December 1, 2025.
The play aims to help students to learn classic Chinese novel. The activity is predicted to attract a considerable of students and teachers. The play such as novel Dae and lecture will be held to inspire students' enthusiasm for classic Chinese novel. Additionally, during the play, you will have many opportunities to meet like-minded individuals, engage in interesting activities and enjoy a great time together.
I would be very pleased if you could honor me with your presence.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
评分及理由
（1）得分及理由（满分10分）
该学生作答的电子邮件旨在邀请朋友John参与一部基于中国古典小说的短剧。现根据评分标准进行评判：
- 内容要点：题目要求包含两点：1. 介绍短剧；2. 邀请参与。该邮件明确发出了邀请，并介绍了短剧的时间、地点、目的和预期效果。然而，在介绍部分存在明显缺陷。首先，未明确提及具体是哪一部“经典中国小说”，仅含糊地提到“novel Dae and lecture”，这可能是“《大闹天宫》”或“《红楼梦》”等小说的误写或表述不清，导致关键信息缺失。其...
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