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Hi Paul,
I’m thrilled to hear about your assignment! Ancient Chinese scientists, like Zhang Heng or Zu Chongzhi, have fascinating stories that would make for a great report.
To prepare, I suggest focusing on three main areas. First, select one scientist and research their most significant contribution—for instance, the first seismograph or the calculation of Pi. Second, use visual aids like diagrams or photos of their inventions to make your presentation more engaging. Lastly, try to connect their work to modern science to show their lasting impact.
Good luck with your report! Let me know if you need help finding sources.
Best,
Li Ming
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(1)得分及理由(满分10分)
该学生作答是一封回复邮件,根据评分标准,其内容完整,覆盖了所有要点:对来信进行了回应,给出了具体建议(选择科学家、研究其贡献、使用视觉辅助工具、联系现代科学),并提供了结尾祝福和进一步帮助的意愿。语言自然流畅,语法和词汇错误极少,如“fascinating stories”、“engaging”、“lasting impact”等用词准确得体。格式正确,包括称呼、正文、结尾敬语和署名。语域恰当,介于正式与非正式之间,符合朋友间就学术问题交流的语境。逻辑清晰,衔接紧密,使用了“First, Second, Lastly”等连接词。因此,该作答属于第五档(优秀)。
得分:10分。
题目总分:10分
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